Paper Mario the Thousand Year Door Doopliss Battle/Toccata and Fugue

[killingpepsi]

Originals: 

(Best version ever  )

 

Remix: https://soundcloud.com/killing-pepsi/toccata-and-fugue-in-doopliss-minor-wip-1

 

This project has been on the back-burner for a few years now, and last winter I listened to the Canadian Brass version of toccata and fugue in d minor and thought, "Hey, that sounds like the Doopliss battle theme a little". So I put in some parts from toccata (most aren't in this rendered version/intro sounded too cheesy) and I wanted to pick this remix back up again this summer. The transitions aren't great and some drum sounds aren't set, but most of the outline sans intro of the track is relatively there. I also started out with the mini-boss theme, don't know why.

[Sansato]

I don't know if this is a legitimate issue or not, but the track feels pretty empty to me. I also don't think that the first minute of the song connects very well to what comes after it. I wish I could be more helpful than that, but I'm afraid that's the extent of my powers at the moment.

Aside from that, I'm actually kinda digging this. I do advise you take my critique with a mountain of salt since I'm not very experienced myself. Regardless, I hope something I said helps, even if only a little.