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I really liked the intro, and the buildup to the melody. But when it finally came at 0:55, I didn't like the instrument you chose for the melody. It doesn't feel like it has any "weight," and just sound bad IMO. 1:07 and 1:44 work much better with that instrument, and I like your decision to make it legato.

I liked 1:55, it was a nice transition, and the buildup after it is once again great. But I still don't like melody that comes in at 2:07.

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