Starfox - Corneria

[Ganaé]

Hi.

I tried this little mix from Starfox Snes. Corneria (first mission)

 

 

Original

 

 

 

[Slimy]

I really liked the intro, and the buildup to the melody. But when it finally came at 0:55, I didn't like the instrument you chose for the melody. It doesn't feel like it has any "weight," and just sound bad IMO. 1:07 and 1:44 work much better with that instrument, and I like your decision to make it legato.

I liked 1:55, it was a nice transition, and the buildup after it is once again great. But I still don't like melody that comes in at 2:07.

[Ganaé]

Thank you very much for you comment Slimy. It'll help me for the next step. Thanks