Eino Keskitalo Posted March 14, 2016 Share Posted March 14, 2016 (edited) Circus table from Psycho Pinball! Part of the source used in the intro Part of the source that was used in the other parts Full source --- WIP (2019/08/04) Nothing like coming back to old nearly finished stuff. I didn't really do a lot about the ending. Shortened the intro a little. Maybe it's passable anyhow. Chiseled the middle quite a bit and made the bass filtering more interesting. --- WIP (2016/04/15) Mixing improvements. Close to finished I think, I need to consider the mixing of the bass end, I'd be interested in thoughts about that (and the mixing in general). --- WIP (2016/03/18) Some variation (such as start/stop shenanigans) for the "chorus" repeat before the outro, compression on the hihats & snare and maybe some other tweaks. The big bass drum distorts the mix here and there (definitely needs some attention), and the bass is kind of plain (but maybe ok?). --- WIP (2015/02/15) I've been sitting on this for quite a while, some feedback would be nice! This is from PRC round 276. Love the game, not a fan of the circus music, but there was one part I liked and felt could use, so I used that part. I didn't find a video with just the music, but I think it all (or at least most of it) is played in the gameplay video above. Edited August 18, 2019 by evktalo small improvements Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eino Keskitalo Posted March 18, 2016 Author Share Posted March 18, 2016 WIP (2016/03/18) Some variation (such as start/stop shenanigans) for the "chorus" repeat before the outro, compression on the hihats & snare and maybe some other tweaks. The big bass drum distorts the mix here and there (definitely needs some attention), and the bass is kind of plain (but maybe ok?). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eino Keskitalo Posted April 15, 2016 Author Share Posted April 15, 2016 WIP (2016/04/15) Mixing improvements. Close to finished I think, I need to consider the mixing of the bass end, I'd be interested in thoughts about that (and the mixing in general). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eladar Posted April 20, 2016 Share Posted April 20, 2016 Hey evktalo, I've never heard the source song before so it's new to me, and I'm listening to your most recent mix only (2016/04/15), but here's some of my thoughts. I like the way the mix starts, with the introductory synth sounding compressed and then gradually increasing in clarity. The first 22 seconds or so I found kind of static, perhaps because the lead synth (sounds sort of mallet-like) is hitting a lot of the same notes/intervals in sequence and I feel like I'm waiting for things to pick up and get more interesting. I also find the transition at 0:28 to get a bit uncomfortably loud and crunchy, but that might be personal preference (struck me as a bit jarring). But things pick up at 30 seconds. I enjoyed the synth lead that comes in at 0:41 quite a bit, it's got a good timbre and I especially like the two ascending pitch-bends at 0:55. Everything melody-wise from 0:30 to 1:24 I found fairly engaging, but I think one of the issues with this section is that the percusion is very same-y and seems repetitious. It ends up being about a minute of not much rhythmic change, which undermines some of the melodic variation and makes the section seem more homogenous than it is. 2:15 - 2:30 also has percussion that is reminiscent of this part and seems to have the same problem. The breakdown at 1:24 is a good change of pace and I enjoyed it. But it's repeated later at 2:30 in a very similar way, which lessens the impact of it the second time. The piece also ends in a way that's not particularly satisfying, it seems abrupt and it's at the end of a section that isn't much different from what we've already heard before. I think 2:30 up until the end of the song should go in a more distinct direction, and conclude in a way that gives the listener a sense of completion. Also: in general there's a lot of neat synth accents that add good color to the song: for instance the supporting rising notes at 0:50, 1:05 (this one is faint and almost flute-like and was a nice touch), and 2:14. These kept up my interest and seemed to stand out appropriately in the mix. Eino Keskitalo 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eino Keskitalo Posted April 21, 2016 Author Share Posted April 21, 2016 Many thanks @Eladar for great feedback! Good to know about the percussion feeling repetitive, I think I'll put a bit more effort into it. Very good analysis of the structure - I'll think of something for the intro and especially outro for certain. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eino Keskitalo Posted July 24, 2019 Author Share Posted July 24, 2019 (edited) Nothing like coming back to old nearly finished stuff. I didn't really do a lot about the ending. Shortened the intro a little. Maybe it's passable anyhow. Chiseled the middle quite a bit and made the bass filtering more interesting. https://www.dropbox.com/s/4whmcktrcf7nj9h/eino_keskitalo-kamomilla-20190804-fc4.mp3?dl=0 Edited August 4, 2019 by evktalo minor update to the final candidate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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