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Time to Smash (Smash Bros. Rap w/ vocals)

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First... I love this.


So how do we make this more awesome than it already is? I would recommend adding some more variation to the track as it progresses. The second chorus shouldn't be exactly the same as the first. Add an extra layer, or something to add some variation.

The intro could use a little work. When the drums come in, the track comes to life, but the intro just sounds a bit weedy at the moment.

There are currently no cymbal hits to accentuate the ends of phrases. They really add a lot of punch to the phrases when used right.

The vocals could use a bit of double tracking to give them a bit more bite. Watch this video for a demo of what I mean. 

Thant's all I got, but good work man :)


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