Populous (Amiga, Genesis, SNES) Remix - The Battle Between Good and Evil

[SegaMon]

Hello OC Remix Forums!

I have long been a listener of the remixed on OC Remix (since 2000, I believe). I'm looking for feedback so that I can continue to improve my song-writing and remixing abilities. It appears that classical music is one of my strengths. The following is the original song from the Amiga version of Populous written by Rob Hubbard:

 

I grew up playing the Genesis version but the SNES version's music also played an influence. The following is an mp3 file of the remix thus far:

http://www.tonalbliss.com/music/displays/goodnevil8.mp3

I feel that I am mostly completed with the first 2:25 minutes but I'd like the song to go until 3:30. Any comments on the direction of this remix? Any critical comments? Thanks.

[SegaMon]

I feel that I am close to or am finished with the remix. Please provide me with some feedback so that some changes can be made if necessary. I do plan on submitted this to the judges so any way that it could be improved is what I want. Please listen to it through the following link:

http://www.tonalbliss.com/music/displays/Christopher%20Schmenk%20-%20The%20Battle%20Between%20Good%20and%20Evil%20-%20Populous%20Remix.mp3

[SegaMon]

I have finished the remix to the best of my ability and uploaded it to SoundCloud. Comments are still wanted so please listen:

https://soundcloud.com/tonal_bliss/the-battle-between-good-and-ev