Cave Story - Running Hell

[Ganso]

Hey hello, I'm at remixing and stuff, and I'm looking for some feedback, etc...

It's not my first Remix, but not the last (?

Thank you (?

 

[Gario]

Hey there, welcome to OCR! Glad to see you using the WIP forums here

I can see you did your homework and got the notes pretty much all spot on - I can definitely recognize the source perfectly. It sounds like you added some additional licks at moments like 1:23, which was pretty cool to hear. The instruments are pretty plain, though - the source used softer electronic sounds, which made all of the instruments blend better. Those synths are very harsh (especially that lead) - for your next arrangement, I'd suggest branching out and using a variety of instruments. Work on making your instruments blend and compliment one another rather than using the same (or very similar) instruments for all of the parts.

If you like doing straight covers, you're definitely doing a great job - covers are pretty sweet. It'd be pretty cool to hear a little more personality in the arrangements too, though. Take something that others composed and add some of your own ideas to it. It'll add something that others haven't thought of before, and turn it into something new and interesting!

Those are my thoughts on it - hope this helps!

[Ganso]

Thanks, I'm new at this, thanks for your comment, i was working on this song, and fix some things, still more a cover than an arrange.

But overall I'm still working on this, perhaps i'll upload the "final" version in 2 weeks.

And again, thanks for your comment c: