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It feels like the rhythm in the cellos(?) that start the song has a triplet with a missing triplet-eigth, when two eighth notes might suffice and make the rhythm less disturbing, unless that's exactly what you were looking for, in which case good job.

This feels like the kind of song that things should be added at each repetition of the melody from 0:22- to 0:51, which would make the switch in play style much more striking. An additional note to make a chord, a variation in the melody to completely switch the chord, something to show a progression that stops when things calm down. The switch at 1:15, I really like, but the section that follows repeats itself exactly, which takes away from it.

So basically, don't repeat measures/bars exactly, and you'll be good. Keep going, I like the general feel you're going for.

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