roydgriffin Posted March 20, 2018 Posted March 20, 2018 I started this some years ago, and now im thinking about reentering the remix-scene and get some feedback. I was trying some more "movie like" approach, like a tense scene that is building up to a battle. satoka-eldon 1 Quote
Souperion Posted March 28, 2018 Posted March 28, 2018 Well, to be frank, my first criticism is that it is too dang short! The opening hooked me in like pre-battle banter and readily gave way for a brief yet intense rendition. There must be more! It feels like the start of a six minute song, which I would already be interested in sitting through, based on the fifty seconds I got. Please do continue this. satoka-eldon and roydgriffin 2 Quote
satoka-eldon Posted April 1, 2018 Posted April 1, 2018 On 2018/3/29 at 3:33 AM, Souperion said: Well, to be frank, my first criticism is that it is too dang short! The opening hooked me in like pre-battle banter and readily gave way for a brief yet intense rendition. There must be more! It feels like the start of a six minute song, which I would already be interested in sitting through, based on the fifty seconds I got. Please do continue this. Totally agree with this! The length of the buildup implies a much longer piece (if not six minutes, then at least three or four). Preliminarily, it might be nice to hear the bass a little more prominently in the first section, and to delay the introduction of the piano until later - it sounds like it belongs at the climax of a repetition of the main theme. Do keep going! roydgriffin 1 Quote
roydgriffin Posted April 4, 2018 Author Posted April 4, 2018 Wow thank you so much for this positive feedback! Yeah, it is planned to be a much longer piece, at least four miutes but also six should be possible. Your comments motivate me, i will definitely work on this! satoka-eldon 1 Quote
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