electric concerto Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 Here is a little remix I submitted of the world song when you fly the Delphinus in Skies of Arcadia. Any questions and comments appriciated. Link: http://www.e-concerto.net/delphinus.mp3 Song has been submitted to OCRemix, and has been rejected by the judges... http://www.ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=6956 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy Jazz Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 Awesome. A Skies Of Acradia Mix. I casn't listen to it just now, but I'll listen to it later tonight and comment tommorow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
watkinzez Posted January 14, 2007 Share Posted January 14, 2007 I liked the bells. Do more with them! They were cool. Wouldn't have seen the source done this way, so nice work in that respect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy Jazz Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 OK, here's my (hopefully constructive) critique: The actual delphinus theme should be a touch louder, there are bits where its a little hard to hear it over the background. Drums should be slightly louder as well. Gets Slighty repetitive between 3:25 and 4:07, I reckon bringing the choir up and maybe even getting rid of the beats here will get rid of that problem. Take out the violin at the end. Instead, I suggest taking the trancey backing out at 4:18, so the Xylophone-thing at the end is playing solo for just those few remaining seconds. Awesome mix though, but change those few things and it could be even more awesome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
electric concerto Posted January 16, 2007 Author Share Posted January 16, 2007 Updated with more instruments and changes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
electric concerto Posted January 16, 2007 Author Share Posted January 16, 2007 OK, here's my (hopefully constructive) critique:The actual delphinus theme should be a touch louder, there are bits where its a little hard to hear it over the background. Drums should be slightly louder as well. Gets Slighty repetitive between 3:25 and 4:07, I reckon bringing the choir up and maybe even getting rid of the beats here will get rid of that problem. Take out the violin at the end. Instead, I suggest taking the trancey backing out at 4:18, so the Xylophone-thing at the end is playing solo for just those few remaining seconds. Awesome mix though, but change those few things and it could be even more awesome. Posted about 5 seconds too soon ... Just made a major update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
electric concerto Posted March 1, 2007 Author Share Posted March 1, 2007 Once again, any feedback welcome, I'm determined to get this song on here.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avaris Posted March 1, 2007 Share Posted March 1, 2007 Hmm the song has a lot of potential. I like alot of the melodies. Alot of the levels are off, in terms of what sounds are dominating the soundscape at a given moment. This is also missing alot of those little things that really add depth to the song. The percussion in general feels pretty thin, did you compress and add a lil overdrive to it? That might help it feel punchier. The lead synth needs an overall, it sound like you got phase on it. Go for some panning elements too, that can add an xtra layer of musical goodness to any song. Work on improving some of the sounds, maybe add in some more orchestral elements to really enhance what you got. Really try to add another layer to rythms instead of just the generic trance rythms. Noppz' mixes are a good example of that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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