Liontamer Posted July 21, 2007 Posted July 21, 2007 Contact: DJStrawberryBanana Real Name: Sam Strane SamStrane@yahoo.com userID:20057 Remix: Ninja Gaiden (NES) Act 5 Stage 3 I've been very hesitant to submit this remix. Thanks for taking the time to listen. I like the end, and not just cuz' it's over! -Sam ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ http://www.zophar.net/nsf/ninja_ga.zip - Track 18 Cool guitar work, but the rest of the elements were really lacking. The percussion had no meat on it, and the writing for it was relatively simplistic, leaving the background sounding thin and empty. The piano and organ sequencing was really mechanical, and the organ in particular was flimsy. There's not an organ in the world that would sound the way it did here. I liked some of the guitar work. Unpolished, but showed some beginner's potential. The piano and beats were both very repetitive, leaving the arrangement feeling stale after a couple of minutes and dragging things down. The arrangement as a whole needed more substance beyond noodling with the guitar. Not awful, but nothing beyond work-in-progress level so far. Use the ReMixing and Works forums to learn more about your programs and get fan feedback in the future. NO
Vig Posted August 11, 2007 Posted August 11, 2007 The guitars really lack body. The piano delay is a bit too wet. You might consider sending the delay return to a different channel. The sequencing is also really mechanical, and the delay just hilights taht. The mix in general is lacking in low-mids. NO
Malcos Posted August 13, 2007 Posted August 13, 2007 The overall tone sounds hollowed out, and the texture is very sparse in places. This feels underdeveloped in terms of both production and arrangement. There is skill here, but it needs to be further developed before reaching the OC bar. NO
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