Liontamer Posted July 26, 2007 Share Posted July 26, 2007 Hello, * Your ReMixer name : Kanar * Your real name : Léo Mathieu, Yann van der Cruyssen * Your email address : corneliuskanar@hotmail.fr * Your website : www.nurykabe.com * Your userid (number, not name) on our forums, found by viewing your forum profile : 75615811 ? * Name of game(s) ReMixed : Faxanadu * Name of individual song(s) ReMixed : 'faxanadu overworld' ? * Additional information about game : original composer : Jun Chikuma Thanks ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ http://www.zophar.net/nsf/faxanadu.zip - Track 9 Minimal, brittle almost, but a very nice take. The bass writing was a hidden gem. Picked up a bit at :24 with some added percussion, then a change in the textures at :38 with various bells and whistles. Track still felt pretty empty though, and the sound quality was inconsistant depending on the part, with the organic stuff sounding distant and the electronic stuff sounding really clean. You need a real ending too; what's in place now is a weak resolution. Overall, I'd love to give it the pass, as it does a great job of personalizing the arrangement though retaining the tempo and structure of the original. Something this brief needs even more personalization in lieu of length and development. If you're not going to build horizontally, build vertically. If this doesn't pass, RESUBMIT THIS! Really cool so far. NO (rework/resubmit) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vig Posted September 23, 2007 Share Posted September 23, 2007 I'm hearing some blending/mix issues..it's a bit muddy, and could really use more in the mid/high range. Aside from this my other complaint is timing. The timing is off in lots of places. Got to pull it together. Aside from that, this is a solid track that needs to be longer. Good stuff so far. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malcos Posted September 25, 2007 Share Posted September 25, 2007 The instruments need to sound more definied in terms of mixing, as they sound quite distant and lost when there are several playing at once. The arrangent is very good, and the instruments chosen really work with the stlye. It is the execution that needs to be taken up to another level. The ending makes this feel incomplete - this submission is good, just needs some more work. NO (Good candidate for resubmission) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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