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Hey, some good ideas here. When the lead piano comes in it sounds a bit clumsy. Timing wise, and it also is a bit, well not integrated, but thats a mixing thing. I like the part around 1:30, nice little gentle part. And again after that part the entrances of the piano is a bit rough. I'd say work on the mixing of the piano, and timing. The guitar coming in at end sounds good. Overall, good work.

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Not only is the piano clumsy, it's in a different key than most of the rest of the song, and it sounds way too loud, and aside from what you play when it first comes in and at 1:53, the source is fairly unrecognizable.

Sounds more like an original song a slightly recognizable part from SMW's Castle theme... Take this one back to the drawing board...

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