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Great piece! You have really good dynamics and the bass drum adds a really nice touch. IThe snare drum that comes in around 2:40 was interesting but seemed a little out of place. Also if you could speed up the tempo a little towards the end (i dunno if thats possible for you) it would make the finish really exciting.

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So musical! This is cool and it really fits the musical style, I can imagine those bits where people would be singing hand in hand, the phrasing is just right for vocals. I don't think a tempo change is needed cause I was expecting a thicker dynamic instead near the end but then I don't know how vocals are going with it. I really like the snare though, I was just thinking "hey come on guys clap along!" so that's awesome.

To me the brass around halfway through the song seemed a little flat, then the trombones feel the same when the snare kicks in. I'd double the trombones with quieter brass.

Very nice though, congratso Reuben.

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