Hello,
Being a guitarist I believe I know what bothered both me and pretty much all of You in that electric guitar: the guy needs to practice. Yes, You! I suggest You start off with vibrato, this is something very overlooked nowadays. As for tone, I believe it generally pretty much did fit, but I'd put about 20% less gain. And... keep it up.
For now, I would rate the electric guitar about 3.5 / 5.
Michael
PS. Don't take it as a flame or large critic, for I only registered to post this suggestion.
