Brambles in the Breeze was certainly my favorite Protricity until this came along, but I'm not sure how much of that is due to the fact that I'm such a huge fan of bramble blast.  I think it's already a great song, and he did some great things to it, but it's not as exciting as Neighburgers.  Again though, I've never heard the original, so I can't compare, but I will go download the original track and check it out. 
I'm not sure what you mean by cheesy in this context.  I didnt' pick up on that at all.  I actually thought the song had a very honest and sincere sense of humor.  And it was heavily produced, but I don't think that it hurts the song, and is in fact one of my favorite things about it.  I rarely hear songs with this amount of "stuff" going into it and having it all work together to produce a pretty amazing whole. 
just listening to this song some more, and wow.  it's just so good.  okay, off to grab the original...