Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1  
Old 03-30-2012, 10:46 AM
Skizor Skizor is offline
 
Join Date: Mar 2012
Sonic The Hedgehog Marble Zone Dubstep Remix

Sup y'all
This is not my first remix, but i think this one got the most potential for a great dubstep track.
For the original track i really like the "refrain" so i choose to build the track on that part.

I appreciate all constructive critisism and specific on the downmix part.
I remixed this in Reason 4 and im still learning how to use this DAW.

If you think it's too messy plz tell me

Tripping in the marble zone take one:
http://soundcloud.com/skizor/trippin...he-marble-zone

Thanks y'all
-Skizor
Reply With Quote
Sponsored Links

Please register to remove the above advertisement.
  #2  
Old 03-30-2012, 10:29 PM
Klaus's Avatar
Klaus Klaus is offline
 
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Brasil
I really like it, but if you use realmente drums samples and medium reverb on it, the song would be perfect. EZ Drummer can do it for you.
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 03-30-2012, 10:59 PM
SuperiorX's Avatar
SuperiorX SuperiorX is offline
Matt Keller, Temporal Duality Director
Luigi (+2000)
OC ReMix Artist Profile
 
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Columbus, OH
There are a lot of good ideas here, but as is, the song sounds incomplete. In particular, the soundscape as a whole sounds very empty. You need more there to fill up the sound, try some pads playing some long held notes and a stronger bass foundation, particularly the pads though, that should help a lot. Your lead synth that plays throughout most of the song sounds very bland as well, which is quite the contrast from some of the interesting countermelody bits you have going on. The lead just feels like it needs some more life. Play around with the EQ, add some filters to it, stuff like vibrato, tremolo, etc. Some crescendos, decrescendos will help too.

Also, I'm not a huge fan of dubstep, but this doesn't sound very dusteppy. I can hear what you're trying to do, but your bass and drums are far too weak. They should be IN YOUR FACE!

Overall I like your start though, this could be very promising. Nice work.
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 03-30-2012, 11:58 PM
Rockos's Avatar
Rockos Rockos is offline
Roch C˘tÚ
Abobo (+600)
OC ReMix Artist Profile
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: La Sarre, QC, CA
Ŧhe basics sounds are cool. But you need to add environement.

More bass, more synth, more variation in the drum path. More build up. A direction for the song. Breakdown section.

Keep it up.
__________________
http://soundcloud.com/rockos-1
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 04-01-2012, 08:40 PM
Skizor Skizor is offline
 
Join Date: Mar 2012
Thanks for the feedback y'all.
I'll sure take it to me and see what i can do with it
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT. The time now is 01:33 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.