Xtormrage

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About Xtormrage

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  • Location
    Venezuela

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  • Website URL
    http://www.jorgeboscan.net

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  • Software - Digital Audio Workstation (DAW)
    Sonar
  • Instrumental & Vocal Skills (List)
    Piano

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  • Real Name
    Jorge Luis Boscan
  • Occupation
    Student
  1. I like the techno feeling, though you need to add more original parts, because the song is too straight forward, is just the main melody over and over again. You got a nice. The mix is pretty good overall. Just don't give up.
  2. I've posted a link to a new mixdown i made. Please give me more feedbacks, I'll really appreciate them.
  3. You don't have to apologize man, you are giving a free service. Yeah, I had that problem, i thought i was doing something wrong. Thanks anyway, next time I'll use your tip.
  4. EDIT 01/22 Thanks Nekofrog and he for the feedback. I've cleaned up the mix and uploaded a new mixdown, it's not complete yet, i still need to arrange other parts but here is another take. http://ocrwip.fireslash.net/?fid=22 Everything is sequenced except the keyboard (even the guitar). Enjoy
  5. The ride in the drums seems a little weird. Also change the loop of the drums, it's too repetitive. And what everyone says. The guitar sounds really crappy. The idea is cool, and also it can be greatly expanded. Some really good guitar arrangement would be cool, adding harmonics, etc. Also the solo part needs polishing and a better soloing. Something more heaver and nostalgic. Good luck though, it's a nice idea.
  6. The arrangement is good, even though i don't like some parts but maybe is something personal. First of all, the kick sound from the drum is no where to be found, in some places you can hear it, but in others is obliterated by the other instruments. Also, when the song starts there's like a strings volumen going up, but they are going way too high. The piano sounds stranges in some sections of the loop. You should EQ better the keyboards instrument (string, piano,etc.). Of course this is my personal review, hope it helps. Good luck
  7. Hello, haven't been in here for a while. I just finished composing this song so i'd like some comments about it. Link: http://jorgeboscan.net/?p=12 Hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the critics. Jorge Boscan