Sounds pretty good for early stuff. But there are some pretty easy things that need to be fixed. First, up the bass, the song sounds hard so you need real deep hard bass. Second, work with the drums, drums are critical in a song, make the drums a lot louder and work a little on the repetativeness. You still have to add some stuff to the song too, but I think it has a lot of potential and I'm a huge fan of SOR2 so I'll be looking forward to the finished remix.