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Bozlifyme

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  1. First let me say that the skin looks awesome. Only thing I noticed was that there were some images and things that I saw that weren't changed so it left a bunch of white space and images that didn't mesh well with the skin. Is there a way to change those in stylish too? I'll make the images on my own, just wanted to know if there was a way to change them. some examples of what I'm talking about, are the main background, the side bar on the left, some of the text in the sidebar, the read/unread icons, the collapse/expand icons, and the go to last post icon. Just a few things I wanted to fix becasue I have ocd. lemme know.

  2. I'd say this is definitely not ready for submission. It sounds too much like a midi and the original work. EQings not that great either. A really easy way to get rid of the midi-ness is to replace the sounds your using with real samples. Branch out and make up your own stuff based on the source. The SFX and voice stuff is a good idea but you may have gone overboard with it. Right at the end it sounded like you were gonna do some of your own stuff but then it ended. Needs a lot of work before it can be submission worthy.

  3. There it is! Thats what i wanted to hear. I big step up from v1. I like the jazzy funk feel you gave it. A good direction to go.

    I like the bass thing in the back where its like a couple base hits and then a mini crescendo or something, but it sounds a little odd for the song. Do you know what I'm talking about? I wouldn't take it out but I would focus on that for a bit to find something that works. I'm not sure what you should do for it.

    *********Maybe someone else could fill you in on this if they listen to the song*********

    I like the break in music at 2:30 and then the lead up but you should cut out the second lull in music from 2:43 to 2:53, and go straight into the beat. Don't break the rhythm like that. If someone was dancing to this song they would be getting ready to go nuts during the lead up nut then...nothing. They'd have to stop and get the tempo again.

    Really liking it now. If you keep this up and maybe even get, dare I saw it, a collaboration goin with some live instruments, you may have a submission worthy piece.

  4. It sounds really good so far. Seems a little cluttered and that first guitar is a little too harsh throughout the entire song. but i suppose it will get the proper attention it deserves in the live version. You should post a copy of this song in both tempos so people can hear the difference. I like the speed how it is now but I wouldn't know how it is at 110 unless i heard it. You know what i mean? Maybe a little short but definitely gives the old classic a fresh feel.

    Haha. and you should do a mash-up with the Chemical Plant song from the Batman on the NES. JK JK. (Well maybe not. that is a cool song.)

  5. I don't even know where to start. I would say these are midi rips except i know they aren't. I guess i have to say that Mario 3 is better but its still lacking in all areas. They both sound really quite. You need to add in samples and change up the sequencing. These both need lots of work before they can be called "Remixes." I know someone else who knows more about it will come in here and give you the low down.

    As far as the Castlevania song, it should be pretty obvious why no one commented on it. it needs a TON of work.

  6. Ummm... weird sound right in the beginning that sticks with the mix for a long time, if not the whole thing. I can see where you might have been trying to go with this but it sounds too midi-ish right now. Kinda needs more YOU. Bass is....blah. Add more effects and samples and stuff. Roz, you wanna carry on from here? lol.

  7. Looking for: More friends

    Occupation: Stealing music, flash, and other people's drawings

    Influences: Everyone on OCR

    Favorite Quote: "Never trust a Bluebomber, unless its dead."

    Band Members: Just me

    Hidden Talent: Stealing

    Relationship Status: Had a girlfriend/ Has a boyfriend

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    I guess thats enough for now.

  8. I was wondering if people could point me in the right direction for the best electronica songs on OCR. I don't care what style, as long as its electronica. So Trance, Techno, DnB, or whatever you know of. Thanks.

  9. Fantastic. I'm sure others might say that it's too quite, but I love the mellow feel and piano work in this. I really can't tell what more this needs and I'm not too technical with my comments. I'll leave that to more inclined members, like Rozovian. If a remixer gets the "It's goin on my iPod" phrase from me, it means I really enjoyed the song enough to want to listen to it again. Annnnddd... this song is goin on my iPod.

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