I'm another long-time lurker, but you're recent work with this remix really interests me!
I believe by industrial music, the posters are referring to your powertools that you've implemented (power screwdriver, etc) in the remix. Some clanging and banging would be a nice little addition, but I'm not an expert in this department.
I love where this is going, the industrial mixed with the chip arp really gives your tune a good drive. A poster gave the opinion of adding an overlay instrument to the melody after you have introduced it to the listener, and I've noticed you certainly have done so, but as someone else already stated, it needs some more "oomph" - more drive, something - and I'm not talking about the beat, you definately got that down.
"Your soundcard works perfectly!" HAHA, that's an awesome introduction to ANY old school warcraft game, no matter what anyone else tells you! If anything, I suggest you make the intro-voice a little shorter. Even the ogre-voice in the middle there fits in with your remix, but leaves the listener (at least myself) expecting something more than just more of the same tune/beat - maybe here you can add something more industrial, besides the powertools, just my opinion.
Overall, great work on this, and keep it up. I'm a warcraft fan from the days of the original Warcraft: Orcs and Humans! You did not dissapoint this fan, let me tell you!