Alright, I really like this remix so far. The vocals are really interesting, though they sound a little too airy, like not full enough. It gets better later in the song though, and it sounds good overall. Also, during the flute solo, bring the flute more to the front. It took me a second to realize that the flute was having a solo, and that might just be my headphones, but I still think you should look into it.
I might also sugest you make the ending fadeout a little longer. It just feels too sudden to me.
Overall, though, I think this is a great mix!