Hey there. I've been listening to the remix for a while now, and I really like your take on the Molgera song. It has a very "Ballad of the Windfish" feel to it.
I was listening to your newer version of the song, and I noticed that you pulled the Ocarina into the background.
Because of this the song lacked any lead foreground instrument.
The plucking instrument or whatever you used at 1:48 in the song was too far in the foreground, it seemed to overpower all the other instruments, which is a problem since it sounds like it was just there to 'add' to the other instruments.
It sounds like the song could use these changes:
1. Bring the Ocarina back to the foreground as the lead instrument.
2. Lower the volume of the Drums by a bit.
3. The plucking instrument at 1:48 needs to be in the background just 'adding' to the song, not taking it over.
As the song stands right now, I very much prefer your first version. Excellent work so far, Progressive.