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    Lurking for years, finally trying my hand at Dennis (the Menace) for Amiga

    in Post Your Game ReMixes!

    Posted

    Definately big improvements, very nice energy throughout. I'd say the track is done except for one part where I see potential for improvement. When the melody raises up after the boom towards the end, I think you should double that part and add some crazy synth soloing before retiring back to that familiar beat afterwards :). It feels a bit contained in this part. That's my only idea for improvement. I think it does work as it is now though :)

    Goldeneye

    in Post Your Game ReMixes!

    Posted

    I like it! Nice synths and cool arrangement. Just keep it up!

    Suggestion: when the song stops, drop it down a notch and then bring in the full arsenal again with some more variations to the arrangement! Some instrumentation switches would be nice too :)

    OCR02041 - Mega Man 2 "Coiled Copper Wire"

    in ReMix Reviews & Comments

    Posted

    This is a great track. Great sound quality. You must have a really good guitar, and recording equipment for that matter.

    Personally I found the strumming a bit loud compared to the melodic content in the end. That's my only complaint about this mix.

    The first half is my favorite. Great use of four guitars.

    I will definately make something like this in the future. You my friend are an inspiration.

    Mega Man 7: Junkman remix (UPDATED!)

    in Post Your Game ReMixes!

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    It is a bit empty overall. Could use some thicker pads or some synth fills or whatever to fill up some sonic space. Bring out the choir as Roz said is a good idea. There is a backing synth that feels kind of thin (the slightly distorted one). Perhaps it would work with some other more filling stuff. Alone it sounds weird. Snare drum is a tad bit loud imo. Another kick sample is a good idea too.

    The outro was cool ^^.

    The track is a bit slow and it sort of never lifts off imo.

    I don't know the source though.

    My two cents. Sry if I came off too hard. There is stuff I liked in there but I focused on the critique to help you =). The track has potential.

    Lurking for years, finally trying my hand at Dennis (the Menace) for Amiga

    in Post Your Game ReMixes!

    Posted

    Allright. Here's what I think.

    Your mixing sounds pretty good now. Though I think the crash that was heard in the beginning sounded a bit too fakey.

    You added a great break a bit after the middle of the song (didn't download so don't know what time) section with some melody changeups and interesting sounds going on. I really liked the panning pecussive effects. After this section there is a raise and a change in melody. It sort of hits you in the face too much. I would enter that section normally, and then expand on the melody towards the end to give it more power. Also I think your song should end on an absolute climax without the outro that you have now. Work on building that climax which is like a repetition of the main part. It should be made more powerful. You could probably fit some more treble stuff in there. Perhaps you'd have to tone down the hi-hats though (which you might consider changign up a bit more, dunno).

    Overall, significant improvement. Good work! Definately potential for OCR.

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