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The Radical Sifu

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  1. Sounds better! :-o Bass is nicer and everything is a bit clearer. But those drums still need more 'oomph' (might be as simple as just turning the snare volume up a bit?), and the mid-range is still muddly. I'm beginning to wonder if it's not so much a matter of mixing and whether you've just got too much going on compositionally. Does that acoustic guitar passage need to continue the whole time? It seems like there's just too much going on in the meat of it.

    Getting there! 8-)

  2. Man I always loved this theme :) good to see someone rockin' it up a bit! I love the solo work in this. This is shaping up to be really nice.

    Some thoughts:

    -The mixing is a little muddly when the lead guitar comes in, it would be nice if the rhythm and lead parts were given a little more space each in the mix.

    -Drums sound a bit weedy and fake. I especially noticed the toms in the intro. Better samples maybe? Also not in love with the constant kick drum run near the end of the song.

    -Acoustic guitar intro could do with a little more high-end or to sound a bit more 'crisp', plus guitar slide effect sounds a bit weird

    -Bass throughout is a tad bit too loud and rumbly?

    I really really hope you do a bit more work on this and then sub it because I think this deserves to go on OCRemix just for the solo work alone. Good luck! :)!!

  3. Hi there everyone! I'm going to start submitting some vg remixes soon, but here's an original to get started. I've been at this for a while, but I've never really had much/any feedback so I have no idea if I'm any good. Criticism and comments are extremely welcome. :)

    http://cbnow.co.uk/theradicalsifu/The_Radical_Sifu_-_Robots%27_Night_Out.mp3 (5MB mp3)

    Thanks in advance for comments, I hope you enjoy it :) It's kind of a cross between 'chirpy chiptune' and cheesy dance. Don't know how it will be recieved... ??

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