Ahh thank-you, you make plenty of valid points! Thankfully I also had in mind to add the sub bass I just... didn't get to it. Also the song isn't even done yet so that's why it's short, most Hardstyle songs have a longer intro but this certainly is nowhere near being complete just yet. I'll try adding in some of those things and see what happens, hopefully will get an updated Work In Progress posted then at that point!
Ahh yes I agree, the Piano could be replaced with a higher quality sample as it's just a Nexus piano, it probably has a lot of delay on it and that should be turned down a bit. And yeah it's an early WIP of course so there is still lots to do yet! And a kick that early besides just the Tok/Punch should be added you think? I'll try to see what that sounds like. Thanks!