Thanks for the comments! It’s good for me to have someone’s fresh perspective on it, because after so many times listening to the same thing over and over, I get used to something that I might have thought was only so-so the first time I heard it.
Anyway, I agree with the comments about the ending bass (I don’t know what I was thinking) and the beginning bass (I do know what I was thinking, but I couldn’t think of any other way to do it). I will definitely try to make it more interesting.
As far as the piano goes, I had tried to use different attack velocities, but I could not hear any difference between really hard and really soft, so I gave up, thinking there was something wrong with the sound font. Now I'm trying a different font player (not sure if that’s what they’re called) and I seem to have control. So that will be fixed.
By “the higher organ”, do you mean the organ in general throughout the whole piece, or just the parts where it’s higher? I probably will at least try something different with the organ solo at the end per the doc’s request. And about the kick at the end- could I just take it out and end with the ride cymbal only? I have a really hard time figuring out how to bring instrument in and out if you can’t tell.
Anyway, thanks again for the feedback! I will get to work, although I’m not sure how long it’ll be before an update with me being rather busy right now, and also extremely slow at this in general. You could probably feel me blush if I told you how long it took me to write that piece so far.