Honestly, I like the Strago parts better than the Hiryuu parts, but that's just me.
Drums are pretty weak in the intro, aside from the cymbal part.
Also in the intro, I think you need to add more to the soundscape, as it's pretty flat now.
Flute's too soft I think, so raise it up. (A flute is one of the most prominent instruments in a band, make it seem that way)
Now that I'm listening to your Strago, I like it, but the lead should be way louder.
Last part is really good, just metal guitars need to come out more and other leads in the part like the flute.
If you're going to end it like that, make it really loud and dramatic.
MW, your main problem is that you make the background really good, but neglect on the melody. Fix these things, and it would probably be a winning song (against anyone except Sixto).