zack black

Oh and I ended up using Soundcloud since I saw most everybody else does. Made uploading a little easier, that's for sure. You'll see a couple others that were kicking around. https://soundcloud.com/sackwhite peace

My hope was to make a song that didn't necessarily scream Fruityloops. I think the song is "listenable" at least..¿ https://soundcloud.com/sackwhite/synthetic-pop-and-groove is the link. Eventually I'll have more stuff to upload. My internet is horrible so who knows when that'll happen. I put two others that were kicking around. Anyways, I know there's plenty of people with some great ability with music software like Fruityloops (or studio), etc. I can't wait to get some pointers. I get by with tinkering.. but at times I feel held back by a lack of knowledge. Thanks for listening and giving whatever feedback.

I like the melody and especially how it plays with the piano, speeding it up was a neat idea too. It might sound a little harsh (you could tweak the sound or add an effect that smooths it out some) Some of your piano arpeggios are a little dissonant at the end (where your melody plays major notes and the piano rolls with minor ones). And yeah give a little time to accenting parts with some different drum sounds, if only to mask repetition. An easy way to start is to take the same patterns and giving them different twists.