Somewareman

I made a few adjustments here and there, and here's the result: http://tindeck.com/listen/eakcj The original version is here: http://tindeck.com/listen/xuwwl I think it sounds better now, but my ear isn't as well trained as I'd like it to be yet. Any and all constructive criticism is welcome, so please tell me what you think.

Thanks for the feedback, timaeus. Cleaning up the sound quality will help this Remix tremendously.

This is a mix of the Route 38 and 39 Theme, Title Theme, and Bicycle Theme from Pokemon Silver Version. Link to Remix: http://tindeck.com/listen/xuwwl Links to Sources: Route 38,39: Title Theme: Bicycle Theme: I've been working in FL Studio and I'm having some trouble with the violin synth cutting out at parts. It works fine in the program, but not after I render. I'd really like some help with that. Other than that, I'd mainly like some feedback on improving my production quality. (I really don't know what I'm doing when it comes to mastering so please use small words.)

ARRANGEMENT / INTERPRETATION [X] Too conservative - sticks too close to the source PRODUCTION [X] Mixing is muddy (eg. too many sounds in the same range) STRUCTURE [X] Not enough changes in sounds (eg. static texture, not dynamic enough) [X] Too repetitive [X] Too short PERSONAL COMMENTS Nice to see a Mother 3 remix. Lots of good source material in that game. Anyway, I'm really no expert, but I think you could use a little more variation. I liked the intro you had, but "Girl's Room" is such a short and repetitive song, you need to change it up a little more in your remix. As far as your production quality, I can't help much with that. I hope other people will provide feedback. Good luck!