Hello OCRemix,
 
	I want to continue working on this possible OCRemix song, but I want to know if this remix is not literal enough or if some other concern is present... besides mastering, the composition, and "all that jazz" is not complete here.  I would like to create a remix that is going to pass where being too artistic is not a concern.  I think the general framework would pass as it stands now, but obviously the song is not complete.  Incomplete song here is about 3mins in length, looking to make it 5 or 6mins total.  The bass line repeats quite a bit here and is a focus of my possible remix for OCRemix.org.  Drums are essentially missing for now.
 
	-- dolphin92329