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Bren

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  1. Nice job! I like the piano background (as I've been playing one for eight years)and the rhythm is flowing and adds to the happy and just generally relaxed feel of the song. I may listen to too much Prodigy for my own good, but I still enjoy nice pieces like this. Right now, I'm staring at a grey Colorado sky, and listening to this pieces puts a smile on my face even though the sky is dreary.

    No.

    I'm not BSing you.

    The theme is very enjoyable, and the background and rhythms, as stated before, helps complement it.

    Thanks, I'm glad you like it so far. I'm considering drawing a flashtoon for it once it's complete...but for now I'll work on finishing the sections and writing lyrics.

  2. I can't say Im familiar with the original, but I think you've got a pretty solid arrangement here. The only thing bugging me is the guitar sample, it just seems detatched from everything else in the mix.

    Aside from that, I personally like the synth lead a lot for the most part...The only thing I would change would be to *very slightly* reverb it, because when it solos near the end, it sounds rather bland being exposed to that extent. I think percussion could use some sprucing up a bit...it's a rather bland repetitive pattern, and all of the other instruments are miles ahead as far as energy.

    Overall, I think you've got a great start, and I suggest you continue working on it.

  3. I've lost any hope to see snow here before the deadline... I guess I'll have to start working on my entry anyway' date=' but I may lack inspiration :P[/quote']

    Here... found this on Google:

    Capitol%20in%20snow.jpg

    I say just use the upper right quadrant.

    Also, the deadline is Saturday night, correct? I've been busy with finals this past week, and also dealing with a cold, so I haven't started yet. If it's at night then I still have some time at least.

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