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i suspect this may be using suno. i will ask before listening to a 12 minute piece. edit 9/15: sure looks like it. NO

sometimes it's nice to just listen to classic tracks. schala is so simple and beautiful. opens with some ticking (thought you meant tick like beat, but it's literally ticking like from a clock) and a big swell before we get some heavily effected piano alongside a pretty heavy beat from the clicking and some new percussion. corridors of time is a beautiful melody line, and the representation here with some fun countermelodic echoes is nice and simple and doesn't try to do too much. 1:21 gives us a few beats of break before some tasteful burbling synths are added in under a soaring string line. there's a lot of little ear candy bits in here that are really appropriate alongside a melody line with as many sustains as this has to keep it moving. string work is good. another shift in feel at 2:28, and we get another representation of the CoT melody line. supporting strings are beautifully reserved and full-sounding. 3:00 brings in schala. this is kind of a sudden shift and i wouldn't have minded a bit more foreplay before just hitting the melody line right after the CoT melody right before it. i did appreciate however how easily it fit over the existing arpeggio in the keys that carried over from CoT. there's some more dynamic strings in here, and then the melody shifts to the lower strings at 3:28 while doubled by a few other elements. the intensification here is nice and subtle and isn't overdone. 4:04's a big dropoff and clearly the start of the end. the bridge material from CoT comes back for a bit, and the lingering strings eventually drop out, leaving us with just arpeggiated piano and eventually just the ticks to finish it off. i like the incomplete melody line at the end - really great way to leave the listener wanting more. zach's a superb musician and this is a great arrangement. i love the push and pull emotionally throughout the piece, as well as the use of clock ticks/sfx to help ground the direction and where we're going. if this is what we get from you when you take time for yourself, let me be the first to encourage you to engage in more self-care! very enjoyable. YES

opens with a swoopy sfx into some big orchestral elements led by trumpets. this is pretty straightforward to my ears - it's the original midi with a few modifications (mostly in the percussion), with acoustic instruments instead of the original synths. it's slowed down a bit, but that's the only interpretation i can hear. the whole track is pretty blown out too - it's very loud and the instruments don't really have any volumization or velocitization done to them. this doesn't fulfill our submission standards for arrangement unfortunately - it's more of a cover. please consider visiting the workshop discord channel or the workshop forum here on the site to get some more feedback. NO

lol, what the heck opens with a pretty standard transcription method - brass for fanfares, winds for accents, low strings for chords. the brass articulation is surprisingly good for this - i really expected it to sound like machine guns. and the flute articulations are nice too. the solo violin that comes in around 0:16, doesn't sound very realistic initially - it needs more vibrato, if you can add it - but the schmears that come in right after sound pretty good. the cymbals in the backing in the quiet section at 0:29 are a bit much. this picks up with more well-articulated strings around 0:35 - the marcato is almost overstated there - and it comes back around into a similar scoring as the opening. trumpet note at the end of the run at 0:46 doesn't sound right. i liked shifting the melody to the brass right there though, and then letting the winds take the melody for a bit. we start to hear the crossfade at 1:11, i think - the lead instrument there sounds pretty buzzy, and even more at 1:24 the buzzy nature of the lead starts to cut through. the backing elements are very close to the opening section, which is highlighting an underlying issue with this arrangement - it's short but there's a lot of repetition in how things are scored and represented. on cue, 1:35 has the same crescendoing violin line as earlier. we do finally get some new material at 1:57 - i liked the interplay between the trombone and winds. soon after around the 2:05 mark we get more of the backing original synth tones. by 2:31 it's the original for 30s (or close enough it doesn't matter), and then there's a fadeout. from a conceptual standpoint, this is a really clever idea. i love the idea of a crossfade into the original synths as part of a classical work - easily the farthest from those tones we can get despite having a lot of similarities (non-vibrato violin or flute vs. sine wave, for example). in terms of execution, the instrumental realization is pretty solid in most places too, with uncanny valley elements really only popping on some of the overly-marcato strings and the solo violin. my issue though is that the arrangement uses a lot of repetition of the same short blocks of harmonic content over and over. for a track that only has original material for 2:10 out of 3:05, we shouldn't only get eighty seconds of original material before there's repeats. i will note as well that the crossfade idea is neat, but it should be more obvious when it starts to show up, and then slowly ramp up from there (that is, start slow, speed up in middle, end slow - logarithmic fade). i really only hear it in the lead initially, and then suddenly everything gets replaced. separately, having 20% of your piece being original audio isn't a positive - i understand referencing it for maybe 10s, but not so long. taking another crack at the arrangement so it doesn't repeat itself so much and then separately cutting down the original audio at the end would be enough for me. as it is, there's too much repetition. NO

loads of sound design and sfx clips to start. a beat starts to surface at 0:27, and the rhythmic foundation for the original N64 track can be heard in the patterns being played here - an interesting idea. there are steadily more melodic elements added in until we get to the break at ~1:02, and then 1:21 is where we start hearing more of the melodic material again. there's some alternations in here, and notably the choice of notes at 1:40 and 1:47.5 are a half-step off of the key (should prob be Eb-F instead of D-E to avoid the D-Ab tritone)). this is real intense for the most part and a toe-tapper of a section. i really like the super-heavy electro bass through all this. a mid-range element is added around 2:04 that feels a little too much and makes it a touch too dense, but overall this is a neat section. the melody coming in as a break near the end of it is a good glue section. between that initial part and the deconstruction that happens after, around 2:30. we get a wildly unexpected stylistic transition at 2:58 into...i guess hindi trap? the bassline here is really fun. this noodles quite a bit but is recognizable. there's another unexpected break before a short exploration of the opening few bars of the venom stabs, which morphs into a more brickwalled intense section of venom's stab section. there's way too much going on here and it's hard to hear any one thing, but i guess that's fitting for the style. the ending's a bit of a letdown after that level of intensity, but it's a fine ending and wraps the track. this is a surprisingly straightforward arrangement of the venom theme, for the most part. there's some really wild exploratory sections that probably could have been integrated better with more patience applied to the transitions, but what's here is interesting and approachable. YES edit 9/15: listening again with some of the context from subsequent votes. wake and chimpa are right - this is so very hot when compared to other edm. i didn't notice how much the high mids especially were pushing on my ears until i came in fresh. cosigning their votes. NO

opens with light instrumentation. the bass is notably boomy, almost to the point of being distorted, and it's heavily in the left ear so it feels unbalanced. guitars and voice feel suuuuper organic - like they're right there next to you, and the intentionally not-perfect vocal approach is so good, right out of a cafe. drums are probably too complex throughout this entire opening section for the style. 1:17's section is a significant transition, and IMO it isn't prepped as well as it could have been - it feels very sudden, and it stays in this lighter, simpler feel for a while so it's surprising. the vocal work here is way more involved than i anticipated as well - 1:41's got a zillion parts, i'd love to know just how many recordings that is! - and although i don't understand a thing that's being sung, i still got a smile on my face during it. there's a short solo, a recap with some source and an interesting reharmonization in the end of it, and one more solo to cap it off. there's a neat riff at the end of it. so the song itself is overall pretty cool, and feels very real and present to me (outside the panned bass being so heavy in the left ear). but my issue is source content and non-VGM content. for the source element, if i'm not mistaken, there's 59s of source to start, 17s at 2:22, and that's it. the chord progression at 2:06 is imo too generic to count, but the last chord progression has some more of the characteristics of the source and so i'd count that, which would be 25s more. that does get over the 50% guideline, barely. for the non-vgm content, almost a third of the song is directly from a non-vgm track. we rejected a nine-minute track for having a minute of non-vgm content in the past. based on that example, i think this breaks the rule stated in 3.3. in the submission standards. which is a bummer because this is a neat idea! if this was the main theme from Zelda arranged in a style reminiscent to waters of march, then i'd be fine with it. but as it is, i don't hear any of the main theme in that 50ish-second section at all, so it's just a cameo which unfortunately we specifically try to avoid. bummer! but a fun track. thank you for sharing. NO

This started as an idea in my head for the DoD Brevity Month before the theme was announced and then i saw my idea was not eligible. When Koji Kondo month was announced i knew i might try to do this, but the whole thing got fast tracked when Matt mentioned wanting to sing more in portuguese. That was my cue to get the ball rolling. / So, what is this? This is the Zelda overworld theme, in brazilian bossa style, and the lyrics are translated from the classic "Rabbit Joint" cover from way back in the day. The lyrics were translated by me and its a localization not a literal translation, however, if you throw then in google translate its wasy to see the origin. During the arrangement process Matt mentioned how much he loves Tom Jobim's Águas de Março, and that it wasn't that different from the Zelda theme. So we got to work and managed to sneak a bit of Águas there, this time, the lyrics are completely original and created by me, as a hyrule-parody of the Jobim original. Sprinkle some solos here and there, and this is the result: Águas de Link. a cover of a cover that is not really a straight cover. Hope you like it aswell. Credits: tibonev: arrangement, guitars, bass, drum programming, lyrics Mattmatatt: arrangement, guitars, vocals, mixing. Lyrics: Link, ele vem para a cidade ele vem salvar a Princesa Zelda Ganon a raptou a alegria roubou mas volta quando Link salva o dia Link, encha seu coração para usar a espada do poder e quando estiver mal uma fada virá ajudar então seja corajoso e não seja um covarde É pote, é gema, é um belo rupee é uma galinha assassina, um link sozinho é um arbustro cortado, é o link olha só é a zelda, é o leever, é lynel e armos é o dungeon de água e a fada maneira ganon chefão, vai acabar com a zueira. É pote, é gema, é um belo rupee é uma galinha assassina, um link sozinho é um arbustro cortado, é o link olha só é a zelda, é o leever, é lynel e armos é o dungeon de água e a fada maneira ganon chefão, vai acabar com a zueira. Link salvou o dia Ganon está morto A Zelda está livre e o nosso herói é o Link! e o seu nome entrará para a história! Source breakdown: 0:00 - 0:10 - Intro Chords (Source) 0:10 - 0:17 - Intro Melody (Source) 0:17 - 0:59 - Main Melody (Source w/ re-harmonization on the first verse) 1:00 - 1:17 - Original Transition Part 1:17 - 2:05 - Águas Part (Jobim Parody) 2:06 - 2:22 - Solo 1 - tibonev 2:22 - 2:39 - Main Melody (Source) 2:40 - End - Solo 2 - Mattmatatt Games & Sources The Legend of Zelda - Overworld - Koji Kondo prophetik note: found this version of the song mentioned above:

opens with expected drums and associated fills and sfx elements. the arpeggiated bells come in pretty early, and at 0:29 we get the short melody snippet from the original that is in the background at 0:07. there's a kind-of-breakdown right after this with the long strings, and this builds up elements until the actual breakdown at 1:19. 1:19 sounds like original audio to me for a bit before we get real instruments again in an extended sidechain section going over the same strings as before - this is copy/paste. 2:30's again the same strings snippets in a build alongside some sfx, and then a section that's the same as at 0:15. this is followed by the same thing that happened at 0:29, then the same thing that happened at 1:32 (but just the first measure, repeated) for a long time, then an outro on this same section. this is overall a pretty straightforward concept. my concern is that about half the track is repeated material that, if it isn't copy/paste, is really close. there's no concern about volume of source usage - it's just that i don't hear why i'd listen to the second half of the track if i've heard it all already. i think the shape of the piece is fine, the track isn't particularly sparkling in the mix but it's not bad by any means, and i think that the initial adaptation is a good idea. i'd want you to either trim the copy/paste sections or add other elements to them to make them more unique - new instrumentation, new countermelodic elements, or more personalized approaches, for example. NO

It's sort-of house mixed with deep trance, electro. Games & Sources This is the ''Mission Control'' theme, from Gex 3: Deep Cover Gecko on Playstation 1.

fun original. opens with some big, effected synths right in the front of the stereo field. drums are very treble-heavy initially (outside the kick of course) - there's a lot of 10khz+ content in those hats and snare. the beat kicks at 0:42 alongside some sfx. there's not a lot going on initially outside the kit - just bass and an arpeggio stab, and we get a 303 added in after a bit. this section goes on a touch longer than i'd expect given how little's there. we do get a transition into a more chippy, distorted sound around 1:27, and this functions as a break until the drums come out of the closet again at 1:52. there's some pretty hyper bass work initially and then we get a recap of the earlier fairly-thin section from 0:42 (which is the A material from the track). there's another break at 2:35 with the B material, and some sonic theme-adjacent material at 3:00. this builds up and is eventually The Big Chorus at 3:20. i still don't feel there's enough going on in the backing elements for this section - there's nowhere near the intensity or beef of some of your reference tracks for the backing elements. they're very bland and smooth, and that contrasts negatively with the angular lead and aggressive drums. the lead rises to a sustained peak, and then it's done. i think what you have here is a really neat idea. the original's two-phase approach and intense, slow melodic line fits a dnb approach really well, and you've got a pretty solid overall shape for the track with a good amount of breaks and intense sections. what i don't feel is in place yet is the actual payoff sections - almost every section of this track feels like it's missing something. the opening big section at 0:42, like i said earlier, is just kit/stabs/bass, with nothing in the middle of that. similarly, the big hit at 1:40 is the same instrumentation and has nothing in the in-between area until 2:15 - and that instrument is both hard to hear clearly due to modulation on it and is pretty low in itself. last example is the big payoff chorus at the end, at 3:30 - the backing material are these big, bland block chords in pads. this should be the most intense, invigorating section of the song, and most of what i can hear are overly-loud pads. so i think that you need to take another look at each section and find something to make it interesting and compelling. listening again to Hold your Colour and In Silico, each big payoff section that they have in their songs has simple instrumentation (like you have), but each element is uniquely compelling in their own right. finding a way to hit that balance here is what you're missing right now. NO

opens with a big, heavy approach to No Escape. the lead guitar sounds really not real in this opening section. verse transition is very sudden, right off the riff in No Escape. vocals come in right away. drums are really slamming, the snare especially sounds huge and meaty which doesn't really fit the backing elements. the mix is a little unbalanced here as well in that it's tough to tell which vocalist is the melody line (it's supposed to be the higher of the two parts, originally Ashley Barrett's voice). the backing elements are not easy to grab onto either - the guitar chords sound like they're on autowah, and the pitches are hard to grok - this is exacerbated by the reharmonization of the chords under it, which don't sound like they support the vocal lines much at all. lastly, the bass line is just arpeggios, which doesn't really provide any basis under the vocalists. i don't think i'm a huge fan of this verse's layout or execution. the chorus feels more rooted, both because of the less-effected rhythm guitar parts and because the bass is sitting on notes instead of riffing. azmodea's voice is more in front here as well which helps. there's a few pitchy notes in here in the vocal lines. i felt that the changed chords at 1:37 don't do much to support the vocal lines again. second verse is more rhythmic in the backing elements, which is a good choice to mix it up. drums are still really slamming - no dynamics. around here you really start to notice the lack of space between verses and choruses - a few bars of space after the chorus would have really allowed for some room for the mix to breathe. as it is, we're two plus minutes of constant singing into the track, and it's noticeable. a few of the cutoffs (like at 2:16) aren't in time, which also makes it hard to track the melody line. 2:30 brings back the autowah guitar - i really don't care for that, i think it's just clogging up the background without adding anything. the second chorus is straightforward beyond that and what we'd expect given the previous chorus. there's a solo break at 3:00 that is pretty clearly not a live instrument but is tbh pretty creative in approach - i just think that some more attention could be paid to the pick/hammer-on setting for the attacks of the notes on some of the runs. there's The Big Chorus after this, starting at 3:47. sounds like double kick, and the background is just staticky mess with all of what's going on back there. the vocalists sound like they're set on top of the background instead of being part of the backing elements. this section is a dealbreaker even without the issues in the other areas - it sounds pretty rough. there's one last sustained note, and the track is done. i really like the concept here. i'd say that Good Riddance as it is originally is one of my least favorite tracks on the Hades soundtrack, specifically because there's never any breaks in it and it kind of just meanders. reharmonizing it to reinforce the beautiful melody line (when it isn't wandering) is a great idea, and metal fits the genre of the game very well also. i'd say that the execution is lacking here, however, in a few major places. the first would be energy management - you've got constant singing for 2.5 minutes without breaks, you've got the drums going HAM in the middle of a verse where the singers are down low, you've got little dynamics throughout from a macro point of view. giving the track some room to breathe via more intentional, notable dynamics and a break after the first chorus (even 8 bars) would be a huge positive. the reharmonization of the verse especially does not do a lot to support the vocalists. several of the new chords don't actually fit the existing vocal harmonies, and it doesn't sound like the lower vocal line was updated to help with that. separately, especially with the wah guitar and the bass guitar in the first verse, the backing elements don't really clearly delineate the chords being played, so it's hard to map the vocal lines to what's going on underneath them. pads, keys, or more intentionally picked/arpeggiated guitar parts can help with this, so that there's not octaves between a very fast arp in the bass and singers in the middle of their range. overall, the track has a big peak at ~100hz regardless of where you look, and you can hear it it - there's a big, oofy feel to a lot of the mix without the foundation in the 30-40hz range i'd expect from metal. i can hardly hear the kick most of the time, and i think that the vocals could really use a lift around their formants (traditionally around 2.5khz for male/3khz for female voices) to help them stick out of the mix better. getting the kick to have less mud and more distinct beater tone will help as well, as will some more intentional EQ on the guitars. that's a lot of notes! i think this track definitely has legs, and just isn't there yet (similar to when i played the game for my first fifty runs or so). so chasing some of these elements down and addressing them should help craft a more complete whole when it's all said and done. 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opens with big drums initially, and a whistle for the lead. band and folk elements come in at 0:15, and the rhythmic approach immediately put a smile on my face. the first big band section with multiple lead instruments sounds great, although the rhythm guitar's a bit loud. there's a short toms break before a quick half-time section, and we're back to the head quickly after. again, the rhythm guitars sound loud through here - especially after the lead guitar comes in. this gets pretty hard to hear the lead line. there's a short acoustic riff section to end it, and then it's done. this is a fun track! doesn't overstay its welcome, clever approach, and i think you do nail the style. i want to hear the rhythm guitar channel turned down a db or two before it's done, but that's a super quick fix that'll take longer to render than execute. CONDITIONAL (on reducing the rhythm guitar volume in the big chorus sections a bit) edit 9/8: the fixed balance elements are enough for me! i can hear the lead clearly throughout, and i don't mind that you didn't have to turn down the big guitars to get there. this is good enough for me. YES

fade in (haven't heard that in a long time). bass comes in and isn't really the original's but is reminiscent of it. there's a lot of mud down there around the bass. the vibes with the 'melodic content' (i use that term lightly) come in soon after and the track is more recognizable at this point. i like the vibrato on the vibes, it's well-used here. 1:17's a transition to the opening feel, and the snare variation is similar to the earlier scratch work. the sax that comes in after this is a bit forward - adding a bit more room tone might make it sit back in the mix a bit more. there's a break at 2:03 with just the bass, clave, kick, and vibes. we get another chorus after this of the scratch, another 8 with the opening drumloop, and it's done with some sfx. there's some fadeout cleanup that could be done there - i can hear one of the sfx clips ending. this is an interesting approach to a highly non-melodic original. i think it does a good job representing the original without going too far afield in an effort to make something big out of it. i like the vibes especially, they make the piece. YES

opens with some filtered arps and wide synth elements - i really like this opening feel. the sfx panned to the sides might be a little loud on headphones. i don't hear any of Howling Gears in this opening section, although the arp is reminiscent of the B section as you stated. same issue at 0:36, i don't hear that pattern either, but i do catch the bassline when it comes in at 0:52. the guitar part is playing something that's reminiscent of the piano in the original after this, but to my ears the piano's playing an octave, and the guitar is playing a maj 6th. 2:35's a big shift, and shout's b melody is indeed present although i don't understand at all how it fits into the setting that's already present when it does come in. it sounds like it's in an entirely different key (the backing elements really look like Bb to me and shout's b melody is being played in Fm). the following guitar-led section is easier to understand and more obviously maps to gears. there's a big dropoff here before it gets back into gears again as interpreted earlier. there's a big filter that hits at 5:11 and doesn't sound like it goes away for a long time here - the bottom end feels like it's missing until almost 6:00 for a few seconds. this goes some pretty wide-ranging places, which is neat. my main concern is the source usage, because i don't hear it in extended stretches of the track. i am gonna need to do some timestamping on this because as-is there's not enough source. ? edit 9/4: thanks to jnwake for more in-depth analysis. even with the expanded source notes above, i just can't grok most of the connections that are called out. i would need more explicit, present instances of source material before i'd be able to consider this one. i also think the track would benefit from some more intentionality in the sections, but overall do agree that the track is generally well-produced and quite listenable. NO

this doesn't even need more comments than the source being not present elsewhere than the opening - this isn't pokemon music, it's an original track inspired by the original. this doesn't have a place on this site. NO

lot of mud in the opening section. vocals are super warbly and have a distorted tone that is an easy tell for ai vocals right now. in general the arrangement is not really based on the original at all, but more the concept of the character. there's also, again, a number of notes that are 2-3x longer than a human could hold. it's a fine original track if you like fake music, but the utter lack of source material means it doesn't have a place here. NO

those exports are low-poly, FYI, larry. source usage is a dealbreaker as liontamer mentioned. melody line on the verse for this track fits less than the vocals on the other tracks. there's a lot of weird transients especially noticeable around the 1:35-1:45 section and again the hats/cymbals sound really janky, they're just noise. NO

man, this could have been really cool if it was not so obviously fake. from a concept perspective, tying an a capella arrangement to luigi's humming in this ost is great. but the words are obviously not written by a person, and the source doesn't come back after the first 30s. NO

not enough source again. there's some fun stuff in the actual vgm sections, even if they're not real instruments. lyrics are better than some of the other tracks this dude submitted (although the whole verse around the 3m mark is nonsense), but i agree they're kind of tired by halfway through the dozen. the section at 3:33 has a bunch of conflicting notes even without the vocals going 110% over a bunch of strings, and that slide at the end is pretty silly. same with the sustain at the end of the song. NO

there isn't enough source to pass the standards. the sax parts sound generated with how buzzy they are. this is so frustrating because they're fun songs to listen to, but the artist is trying to cover up just how much they didn't do. craig stated that he played many instruments and used tools to cover the other elements, and specifically stated he didn't use genai to make the track. i do not believe him and do not believe we should accept future submissions without clear proof that he's creating future stuff himself. NO

i'll note that the 'arranger' explicitly avoided responding about who actually wrote the arrangement. they stated who played the instruments but did not clarify who wrote the overall track's arrangement. the track doesn't have enough source so it's a definite no. separately the text is word salad, like larry said (although the joke about going to call mario at the end is admittedly funny), and all of the overheads for the drums are just static. the guitar work is solid throughout, i'll note, and i liked the aggressiveness of the opening section and specifically the altered chord at 0:24 was a fun idea. it's too bad the rest doesn't have anything to do with zelda. NO

some creepy bass effects to start, but the ice path bass line is clear right away when it comes in. there's a filtered build that's clearly going to go hard, and it hits at 0:41. band sound is a big, aggressive vibe that feels like it's in half-time, and there's some really fun gating and effecting to keep it feeling like that even through the initial break at 1:09. bongo tone is really unexpected and tbh doesn't feel like it fits into the rest of the super-synthetic vibe. the team rocket theme comes in right after this and really fits the feel well - what a great combo. there's a bit of a break at 1:36 that's more of a drop and build - again, excellent work combining in the team rocket theme here - and at 1:55 we get a transition back to the ice path melody. this transition into this was a little rockier (no pun intended) in that the key didn't make immediate sense in my head listening to it. there's a big fall-off after this section at about 2:40, and we get some sfx before a slam transition back to team rocket for a few seconds before we close out on the ice path bassline again. this is a fun ride! i really like the approach and how intense it is without relying on a fast tempo to bring the energy. there's a ton of details hidden in here that are fun to explore. excellent work combining two great themes. YES

opens with some filtered pads and fire sfx. the keys that come in have a beautiful tone - just the right amount of twinkle. the sweepy pads behind it alongside the buzzy bass and chippy arps are just so good - this opening is spectacularly engaging and reminiscent of starlight and the heavens. there's a great autopanned synth that comes in at 0:37 which is imo a touch loud, but i love the tone and what it's doing. a beat comes in at 1:18 and we get a huge genre shift. what a surprise! the accelerando into this is a neat idea too, as a method to help feel like it's being kickstarted. there's some fun rhythmic elements, a filter squelch transition, and we're back to the fire sfx as the Knight wakes up. a bit of a recap and then it's done. i love the suspended chord right before the end, and then adding in the color tones to help make it feel not quite settled at the end (that b2 is delicious). short and sweet, this is another winner from two superb musicians. the story is clear and the inspiration that was taken from it results in a really unique work. excellent job. YES

opens with some filtered synth stabs and some nice pads, very chill. melody comes in at 0:48 - i really like the lead option here. there's a heavy sidechain that's very chill and groovy. there's a break after this section for a bit before we get some of the B material. i like the choice to just use the first bit here and loop it - fits the genre well. there's some whistly bits in the background here that are really nice countermelodic opportunities. there's a big drop at 2:49. there's some FTL-like feel in some of the synths here. i'll admit i wouldn't have minded you using this opportunity to bring in some new tones to the melody parade, but the augmentation used initially here is fun and a neat idea i wouldn't have initially noticed if you hadn't pointed it out. the beat drops around the 4 minute mark and plays us out from there. i wouldn't have minded a resolution for the ending, as this does feel like it just stops. this is a real vibe, dude. i like the attention paid to just grooving through the melodic material. i particularly like the heavy sidechain and how that fits the backing stuff along the angular melodic line. nice work. YES

original is one of my favorites from FF7. opens right away with stutter synths and some recognizable samba-adjacent rhythms in the percussion. the cosmo canyon bassline is there as well but not particularly present. the melody line comes in at 0:19 in what i think is an electric guitar, and there isn't a lot of personalization. guitar doesn't have a lot of body to the tone or verb/delay/chorus to fill it out - part of this might be how it's being recorded. the chorus section of the melody line has a lot more going on, mostly in the drums (there's some really sick stuff happening here in the drums). 1:36's got a solo section which is pretty fun. there's a comp section for a bit and then the melodic line comes back in for a recap. there's a fadeout after this repetition of the entire verse/chorus structure, and it's done. the whole mix sounds like it's been recorded on a smartphone - there's a big hole around 2khz across the board, and each instrument sounds like it's missing something. i think the main issue is just the actual mics being used for the recording, or the recording technique. this is a shame because this is a badass version of the theme! there's so much fun stuff going on, especially in the performance. the original plods in a pleasing, old-world way that makes the build at the end of the chorus exciting, but your version has so much more vibrancy to it throughout thanks to the clave rhythms. i'd love to have heard more variety in the stutter synth - it keeps hammering a lot throughout without much change, and there's definitely room to mix up the backing elements the second time through the melody. a real ending would be great. i also would love to hear more personalization of the melody line, as what's here doesn't take advantage of, for example, the long sustains at the end of each line in the verses. and i'd love an ending, although a fadeout is not a huge problem. but ultimately what's keeping this one back right now is the sound quality. the individual instruments simply aren't recorded at a level that would be acceptable for this site. finding a better way to record - or instead sequencing instruments - would be needed. another option is to use this as a template and get some other folks who have the ability to record or sequence elements to replace what you can't do yourself at a high level. what a fun track! i'd love to hear it with better sound quality and a few tweaks to the soundscape. NO