gliyw1thdabangs Posted February 16, 2008 Share Posted February 16, 2008 I did a sparse cover of this several months ago. I just hit the bricks again and tried to layer the sound better. It still sounds sparse to me and I am having a writer's block on more ideas. I'm planning on putting in two more solos, one focused on a duet with pizzicato and sax and another focused on violin and the sax, and of course a better finale. Please let me know what you think! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted February 16, 2008 Share Posted February 16, 2008 Looks like you didn't change the file name to something that works on the net. I can't download it. Kill all spaces and punctuation and other symbols that can screw it up, and use a shorter name. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koiu Lpoi Posted February 21, 2008 Share Posted February 21, 2008 Downloaded fine for me. I think your main problem, as far as sounds go, is that your notes are too chaotic. There's no real cohesiveness between one measure to the next. However, within the measures themselves, everything's a little too perfectly on beat. A real orchestra wouldn't sound like this - at the very least things would be ever so slightly out of tune and off beat. All I can really say is that you need to capture more of the "spirit" of the song. It sounds like you're trying to transcribe it a bit too literally. Good luck, and keep going! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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