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Good source, I remember playing this. The WiP feels weaker than the source. It's too minimal, and the drums are way too loud. I think the sound is okay, but it needs to be more full. Add bass, your should probably also add a mid-range staccato string loop doubling whatever high-range picked isntrument you've got (doubling it an octave or two down).

More harmonies, more richness, more fullness, more stuff. And drop the drum volume. This could turn out pretty cool, so keep working on it. :D

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