Dash Myoku Posted March 27, 2008 Share Posted March 27, 2008 Something I've been neglecting to put up because of the length. But, I like it too much to let it go to waste. Enjoy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xenon Odyssey Posted March 27, 2008 Share Posted March 27, 2008 There are clipping issues in the latter part of this. And I don't think I heard a clarinet...unless it was playing in the same range as the bassoon, which could be the case, since I misread 'quartet' for 'quintet' (I wrote a woodwind quintet these past two-three months). Other than that, I liked the arrangement. It portrayed the Great Sea as a calmer, gentler place than the original song, though that could be the absence of a snare drum. Although for it to make it on to OCR, you'd probably have to be a bit more liberal with the theme, really giving it your own flair as opposed to directly transcribing it for four instruments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dash Myoku Posted March 27, 2008 Author Share Posted March 27, 2008 There are clipping issues in the latter part of this. And I don't think I heard a clarinet...unless it was playing in the same range as the bassoon, which could be the case, since I misread 'quartet' for 'quintet' (I wrote a woodwind quintet these past two-three months).Other than that, I liked the arrangement. It portrayed the Great Sea as a calmer, gentler place than the original song, though that could be the absence of a snare drum. Although for it to make it on to OCR, you'd probably have to be a bit more liberal with the theme, really giving it your own flair as opposed to directly transcribing it for four instruments. Well, there isn't a Clarinet. Just Flute, Oboe, Bassoon and Contra Bassoon (for added bass). And I'll re-work it so I can nix out those clipping issues. And that's another thing, not much else I can do with this composition. Probably because I just used the lead part from the original and added my own arrangement for everything else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xenon Odyssey Posted March 27, 2008 Share Posted March 27, 2008 Well, you could always lengthen it and flesh out the theme a bit more...however, if you're satified with it, I'd understand. Been there myself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dash Myoku Posted March 28, 2008 Author Share Posted March 28, 2008 Well, there's always the possibility. Never know when I'll have a spark of creativity to add more to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue.nocturne Posted March 28, 2008 Share Posted March 28, 2008 For some of the held notes, I feel that there is too much overall vibrato. It makes it seem a little robotic in that manner. It sounds pretty good so far, but I hope you add more "energetic" parts later on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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