Xenocrates Luna Posted April 25, 2008 Share Posted April 25, 2008 Hi, I'm new to the community (though I've been an OCR fan for long) and finally decided to submit my first work: a Lemmings trance remix. Enjoy! Here's the link -- http://www.supload.com/listen?s=B8DLUE3WXH03 Please comment on anything you think can improve. Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psychog13 Posted April 26, 2008 Share Posted April 26, 2008 Yippee! some lemmings ftw Hey Xeno Just checked out that mix, In a word its pretty damn cheesy hehe but in a relativly awsome sorta way. Alright before laying down my constructive crits im going to admit that I personally am not a fan of 'trance' mainly because of the genres endless repitition and ambience, its not something i like at all and your song did seem to loop far too long for my liking in places but i think thats down to the genre so i guess thats a good thing? Basically dont hold against me anything i come out with as i dont have much of a clue anyways So anyways, what I thought was that fir a start the sounds u were using were actually pretty decent but the lead tune was maybe a little quiet behind the loud siren like phasing-saw-keyboardy-ravey-soundy thing - yes... that thing... - I could barely make it out So sound levels is prby one thing for you to look at. Other than that I think that your drums were very weak and brought the piece down dramatically cause they were really lacking any oomph and just looped pretty much all the way. Minimal or no fills and to be fair it was a pretty weak beat full stop A damn good start though Xeno, the intruments were spot on and came together nicely. Get a bit of practise in writing your percussion and your a winner! Keep it up xGx p.s. Im totally new here too hehe, even though ive wrote loads of mixs in my spare time im only actually submitting my first post in this forum today ^-^ and i would love to hear any critisim u have about mine ( you can get revenge haha ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xenocrates Luna Posted April 26, 2008 Author Share Posted April 26, 2008 Thank you for your comments. (: I'm well aware of the loudness of the siren thingy, and the lack of beef in the drums. Since it's gonna take me some time to fix that, I'm leaving it 'till the end. So far I've come up with something really interesting and will post a link as soon as it uploads. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xenocrates Luna Posted May 10, 2008 Author Share Posted May 10, 2008 I've finally finished this, but due to an error on the submission's link, I won't submit it 'till it's rejected lol So, here it is, enjoy and comment! More than trance, it ended up as an Ambient/Techno song, I really liked how it ended up. Remix: Let's Go!! Original: Lemmings 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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