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Psychog13

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  1. ah refills, so its reason then... I have the damn program but cant use it its way too complicated and overwhelming... I suck. Anyways I look forward to seeing your updated version
  2. We're in the same boat dude dont worry haha. Politely ask Rozovian for a critique he always seems to delivier sound advice with exelent deep anyalsis. That is when he doesnt just decide to bitch about a song he doesnt like. I respect his opinions quite allot though. xGx
  3. Sounding much better now! Only thing i could say is are you using any crash cymbols on that drum kit? Theres a gong which is excellently used but the only crashes I heard was about 2:43 onward. its like you've forgot to use it in the early stages of the song where if used lightly and correctly would aid the build up without making it too dramatic as to ruin the ending feeling of intensity. Over all its looking really really good now, dont know what else i could say about this apart from its good ^-^ xGx
  4. I do have more phoenix wright in the works to make up for the fact this is a bizzare genre, Gumshooooooooooooooooooooe!! xGx
  5. Hey dude thats really nice of your to appolgise like that, im sorry myresponce was a little immature but you've shown you are obvisously understanding and mature about it and stuff. obvisously my mix doesnt appeal to everyone. xGx props to you mr.sneak
  6. First thing, Straight away the bass blew me away, wth how do you do that!? what are you using for that?! its insanely awsome... damn I want to be able to make shit like that. Not sure of the source for this but... The intro voice was cool. The little snare in the beginning was a little poor during the build up until 1:24 perhaps a little echo on it? A few of the initial changes seemed to come very suddenly without provocation which was a little weird but then they started to work better as it changed more and more. at 2:10ish i love the sounds there and then the offbeat hihat sounds reallu awsome together. at 2:52 not sure i like that instrument, its like a distored sitar or something? I mean its ok... It not really bad... drops back down to the bass and some awsome drum loop comes in, some nice fills those are sick. love the build up after that too. loved it all the way to the end This is pretty awsome, that bass omg... share secrets dude xGx P.S. just saw the OST link - didnt realise what OST stood for then it just clicked whoops...
  7. Not bad for a beginner dude not at all, but yeah you gotta do something about those drums. Definatly need some reverb on that sitar and stuff, I use reverb allot more now as allot of people pointed out it does make allot of stuff sound better. The midi guitar noise i hate it everytime i hear it its like an insult to real guitar Although I liked the dropping noise before 55 but when it comes in i didnt like it at all. xGx P.s. haha!! dafydd I checked out yours and i was like "what the hell is this?" its so cheesy but i was digging it! Then when it kicked in i was like "wtf this is awsome" and I loved the entire thing! The build up is perfect, you need to bring that back dude
  8. That hi hat at the start is good up until when the bass/snare kick in. at that point it starts to sound very forced and weird like its played by a robot or something. 2:33 breaks down a bit but the drums dont seem to come down with the rest of it, maybe some ride cymbol? 3:00 gets a little weird, i think some definate fills and proper accents on the drums would help it here the drums just dont seem to match the tune love the way it comes back in though at 3:21 ending it still weird but you said you wernt done with that yet apart from those little bits i think its coming along really well xGx
  9. http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=gZPYFK0HpU8 was the main sorta inspiration for my remix (everything in the first minute and 20 odd seconds can be compared to mine allot) As for you dragonnyght check out 0:49 Got nothing nice to say at least be less of a dick about it. xGx p.s. That phoenix wright remix you linked me to was just boring, I didnt like anything about it... so much for good example.
  10. this was a very serious WIP, the source was awsome. If you havent played the game you have missed out big. I kinda like the bitcrush noise, tried to break it up with the organ which i thought worked well. so you hate voice clips? well i dont, I atcually kinda nicked the ending from a1-the_speedfreak-weapons_of_mass_confusion-1real.mp3 - ill find a youtube link in a sec... illl update soon gotta go xGx
  11. Yeah all the songs didnt seem serious, at all...
  12. This is really deep and dark, I like it. Nice selection of intruments, in particular the snaredrum gong and choir. really liked the pick up at 1:50. There was a werid scratchy noise at about 1:56 which was weird/rubbish. Not sure what I could add to this... Quite like it as is. xGx
  13. This is one ive been meaning to get around to doing... epic game awsome song, perhaps I will soon xGx
  14. I Completely agree with Roz, better drums and add keys! Other than that its cool xGx
  15. I just checked out that site of random rejects who cant remix songs properly and figured that this probably WOULD fit well there cause its better than anything they have... Its all a load of garbage apart from 'Sonic is wunt emruld' which is the only good song I heard and its brilliant haha. The rest of it though just made me cringe which I think is supose to be the sites goal anyways... I dont think I want to be assositated with such stuff I think Im slightly better than that so I'll stay clear of OLR even though I am kinda Overlooked as a remixer Im kinda getting the impression that your saying Im crap by telling me to go there thats kind of how bad that site seemed... If im getting the wrong Idea of OLR then its because of its content that I heard and I ment no offence to anyone should offence be taken. But I can see why you would say this song maybe belongs there in sence because it is rather random but it surely isnt THAT bad... xGx
  16. This is quite a cool song, my only grief with it was the 'break down' was the weakest thing Ive ever heard... The ending is even slightly better than the claimed 'break down' and actually is a breakdown. Lyrics are cool, singing isnt so bad but the screaming is better. I thought the change at 0:22 was a little sudden and a little hard to follow at first. Yet again on the 'breakdown' the lyrics sound a bit random and unclear, could prby be a chant would work better. IMO This song doesnt need a solo. They are overratted. xGx
  17. Hey Last night a friend of mine said I should do this Phoenix Wright song and I was bored so I kinda threw this together... I really liked some dudes warcraft 2 'on this side of the dark portal' on here and i had read he used lots of 'Bitcrush' and i really wanted to try using it myself so i tried in this song. Its my first time using these sort of sounds and stuff and it doesnt sound great and tbh the entire songs a bit of a joke as my friend said he liked song with church organs and bells... so basically this ended up like a mess and i just destroyed it near the end but it was fun. Anyways I think most of it sounds ok not sure if I have done this bit crush thing right though. Tin deck - Source - http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=ew1Nr5rHQn0 This isnt on my myspace yet. Cheers xGx
  18. Had a try, wrote some garbage got writers block and gave up... not enough time for me it seems... Bugger xGx
  19. Well, im surprised you were able to do anything remotly decent with such a terrible source, man this tune sucks... checked out both es2b7 and os2b3 - prefered OS personally on first impression so the following is about that... The start was excellent i loved the way it came in, at 53 the synth was beauitful. Some awsome little sound effects that follow were just sweet. I thought that when the 2nd layer came in at about 1:07 though sounded a little weak, could of used a sweeping noise or something maybe to give it a little more atmosphere I thought. after that there is this over used short bass noise sounds like a 'ziiip' or 'whoop' that got annoying Really liked the way it came back in at 2:56 although i was a little bored just before it it seemed a bit empty that damn ziiipy whoopy noise again at 3:30... by this point I hate that noise all together There is allot that I love about this track though, It is awsome... makes my work look inferiour I like more changes though this is very straight forward and liniar with very relaxed drums - but they work. I think the weakest bit is 2:12 till when it kicks back in again, it feels empty for a long moment which im so not fond of in its current state, i mean even for trance/techno I feel like it lacks ambience like its missing a layer or something Well those were the passing thoughts I had as i gave it a few listens, not sure that i even got the latest version though whoops... Like i said though its pretty awsome sounding reguardless I dont even think it needs changing this is just what I would do to it...
  20. Couldnt agree more, that is one personal dislike with the song myself at the moment. The result after the build up isnt quite right but I thought the toms entered brilliantly well there but what I actually had them doing is kinda lame... Im yet to hear offical responce from the guy i actually bothered to make this for which is disapointing concidaring the time I put into it so most likely wont touch it again until I get some feedback from him but thanks ever so much for this in depth anyalsis Roz, you never cease to amaze... I definatly didnt even notice those pops at 48 until you mentioned them, now they stand out like a soar thumb xGx
  21. Oh wow this theme sounds awsome, seem too good to miss but ive only just read about it now... That leaves me 5 days to write something epic, not sure if it can be done but I may try! xGx
  22. I totally agree with this, the guitar is painful there. I really liked the drums though all the way through, they sound really nice and sound great except for the little weird bit you got at 30 seconds, thought that was a bit arkward. I hate midi guitar which is why I dont use it, real guitar or no guitar is my rule. I listen to nothing but metal/hardcore but I only write techno/electronic cause its the only decent tools I have for writing. Recording guitar ends up being more of a chore than a pleasure. I thought the starting guitar here though sounded alright before :50 I would maybe try to put a flanger effect on it though to try adding something to it like fading it in slightly. It seems to join in rather abruptly on top of a laid back rythmn I think... then as for the heavy part there seems to be too much verb or something im not even sure, ive tried everything to make this midi crap sound good and never had any sucess so it would be a miricle if you somehow did As for the writing its fine I like it. I like the keyboards/atmosphere allot. xGx
  23. If you check the source thats how the tune actually goes... thought i'd stay true to it. the ending does need work it was incredibly rushed... I will have to adjust the verb and bass a little - cheers for pointing that out Cyril Thanks for checking this out xGx
  24. Hey I made this as a request for Nilo. Ive never played the game before but was told it was for a deep space level... I initially wasnt happy with the way this came out but the more I listen to it and imagine space the more I like it... Posted it on tindeck for people sick of looking at myspace, but it is on there also (link at bottom of page) This is kind of how I view it.. 0:00 to 0:58 - Leaving your Planet's gravitational pull looking down on the homeworld 0:59 to 1:23 - Traveling out of the solar system gazing at the stars 1:24 to 1:41 : engage hyper drive everything flys by and strange 1:42 to 2:05 : arrive at new destination and begin to approach an alien space station to dock. 2:06 to 3:35 : doors open and you enter a dangerous environment things get gradually more serious and life threatening... 3:36 to 3:47 - enter a strange control room after a confrontation and engage self destruct rest of song your victorious escape something like that... Like i say it took me a few listens to actually like the piece I came up with was thinking of making some serious changes but now im not so sure. As for sound quality and what ever im pretty sure there are still problems im still not great at it, added lots of verb and 85 freq to the drums and stuff... Hope you enjoy Cheers Source http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=rO8GIXyUhg0
  25. I dont actually listen to much classical these days so I had no real comparrison to a realistic sound but reverb is an excellent pointer. Ill make it fit dammit My idea is exactly that, i actually listen to a lot of metal / hardcore but as a child i was influenced by classical but I also like the sounds of tech stuff happyhardcore / jungle and much in between but dont listen to it as almost every song ive ever heard from the geners are shit haha. I wanted to try and mash everything I like together. Something like Rhapsody/Dragonforce vs Enter shikari vs Frazzbass vs Postmortem Promises vs Holst or something (how totally random lmao), Although imo everything ive done needs more knoledge of the orcestra and definatly guitar to actually finish it but as the latter takes so long for me to record and to actually play the parts well I havent bothered. This is my sound and I want to make it work. Just because it doesnt nessacarily stick to one genre doesnt mean it cant work. And eventually it shall... I hope ... one can dream Dynamics I did try to add a bit but not much. I shall have a look at this guide because to be frank everything else you just said was like reading double dutch to me and its clear this is whats bringing me down... Ok right now im working on a wonderboy tune which all i have atm is the techno element/genre, I was going to add the orcestral stuff afterwards which is the oppisite to what i have been doing but I guess this is a good place to start by leaving it all tech. However I do spend a whole lot of time with each intrument by itself with everything else muted to try and get it to sound good, but im still not sure of what you mean by Mix it better, like i said im going to look at that guide and hopefully ill get a better idea. I assume it has something to do with certain intruments not sitting well together with each other... Your a good person, thanks allot for helping me with this sound advice. Much respect.xGx
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