Golden Afternoon - Kingdom Hearts II

[GameboyKnight]

This is something new I am trying out. I did this work in Finale it's not finished, I just want to work on it in sections. Feedback is welcome on it so far. I will update this with every addition to it.

The song's title is not definite, but the song itself will focus on a medley of Twilight Town themes. |(^o^)/

Please and thanks!

http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/yeay/Golden-Afternoon

[Rozovian]

I'm actually having trouble hearing if the bass instrument is strings or brass, but whatever it is, it need humanization, possibly more layers, chords, counterpoint, something, they're too alone.

Considering the crashing start you had, you should either give the whole track much more weight (at some point), or rework those first seconds. If you're gonna add more weight, you might want to add some to the intro as well, just so it doesn't sound out of place.

It's a nice start, but aside from being longer, it needs to be deeper, more elaborate.