djpretzel Posted April 19, 2003 Posted April 19, 2003 Well, we did the first two - not that that makes the third a guarantee - djp Hello again, I am submitting the third part of my Dancing Madly series. It is called Dancing Madly - Third Form and it can be found at my website, Or at the direct link If it is submitted please credit it to "waxingeloquent" at "waxingeloquent@hotmail.com" It is a bit shorter than the other two but I like it =) Also I will probably hold off on working on #4 for a while, until I find out if any of these get submitted and if I will have enough time to do it justice. Thanks in advance!
Malcos Posted April 26, 2003 Posted April 26, 2003 The mixing on this needs some work. The instruments on this sound really separate, if that makes any sense. Drums sound muffled, and some synths are much too loud compared to others. Arrangement is good, but for me the mixing spoiled it completely. NO
Protricity Posted April 28, 2003 Posted April 28, 2003 This one was lacking the motivation of the others. While that isnt enough to reject a mix, I see a lot of minimalistic expression in this mix. I dont think the rockin original works very well as a repetitive minimalistic song. Other than that, the bent synths runnin along the whole song seem out of other place. This song either goes exactly on the trail of the original or goes way off. I believe the song should be close or far, but not attempt both. The first half of the mix was mostly improve remotely based on the original while the ending fills in the original rather closely. Better instrument choice could have been applied rather than having only sine/triangle wave synths and a few saws. NO
Disco Dan Posted April 28, 2003 Posted April 28, 2003 The girl on the phone says "That sounds like a christmas song" so for that, I'm going to give it a NO for being out of season. No, I'm kidding. But the song really doesn't get cool til about half way through. So PLEASE make the first half cool then resubmit. And the drums could use an upping in quality. So... yeah. D
m68030 Posted April 28, 2003 Posted April 28, 2003 Yeah, I'm with Dan on this one.. it's got some neat stuff going on in it, but the drums are a little too low quality, however I do dig the arrangement. But as for now: NO
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