Tensei Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 Yeah I made this for DoD and I'm debating whether I should finish it and submit it here. Really any feedback on the arrangement is more than welcome, enjoy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SplinterOfChaos Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 I think this track is made of general awesomeness. The drum work in the beginning, the use of organ at 0:34, the simplistic rock sound after the intro, and the background, which is a little hard to hear. That said, I don't like the main guitar. It's too...overpowering? Despite the song being about the same length as the original, it somehow feels short. Good luck with this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
audio fidelity Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 the intro is awesome - keeper just for that the guitar when it enters with the palms should be tightened up a bit. the strings are a cool touch...but seem to fighting for a place in the mix with the guitars. if you can get more clarity out of them i think it would help the mix out, cause they have some of the most original parts. the balance with them and the rhythm guitars seems off. i would strive for a bit more contrast between your sections when the guitar lead comes in. lots of things you can do hear - instruments, tone, fx, rhythm. i really kinda want the drums to just go off into craziness at one point. and by the way, what are you using for drums? they sound great. keep working at it. i like your work. need more of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwordBreaker Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 As far as I'm concerned, this is ready for submission. Enjoying listening to this one a couple of days back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FireSlash Posted August 3, 2008 Share Posted August 3, 2008 Needs a bit of final polish here and there (Instrument balancing plz, violin work after the break, ending), then a winner is you. I'd write out a more detailed response but audio fidelity pretty much nailed it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uboichi2 Posted August 4, 2008 Share Posted August 4, 2008 Oooh yeah, finish it. Then at least I won't be the only dutch Remixer here ^^. Other than that, I think the end is really awesome. Most stuff before it sticks a bit too much to the original a la Black Mages version though. Usually not necessarily a bad thing, but there are 6 other J-E-N-O-V-A mixes already. You'll be competing for originality. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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