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The music's speed shouldn't be always the same, try delaying it a little wright before the beginning of each section. Also, those chords at 0:30 are a bit too loud(actually, try to double the length of that section, that would work).

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Hi Cree.

I gave your WIP a listen. The one thing that struck me immediately is that the piano sounds too quantized. It doesn't sound like a human is playing it, for every note is virtually struck at the same time throughout the piece. The other instruments you added do add some variation, but they don't sound natural, especially in their releases. Fade out the volume as you get close to the end of the notes, and it'll sound more human. I'm not liking the trumpet sound too much, for it sounds thin.

There's more I can add, but I just wanted to start with what really caught my attention upon the first listen. Keep us posted on your updates!

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