Cree` Posted August 9, 2008 Share Posted August 9, 2008 Tell me what you think, also could use some constructive criticism. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cree` Posted August 11, 2008 Author Share Posted August 11, 2008 Bump... Its rather quiet in here.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DramaNoMore Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 The music's speed shouldn't be always the same, try delaying it a little wright before the beginning of each section. Also, those chords at 0:30 are a bit too loud(actually, try to double the length of that section, that would work). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jago Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 Hi Cree. I gave your WIP a listen. The one thing that struck me immediately is that the piano sounds too quantized. It doesn't sound like a human is playing it, for every note is virtually struck at the same time throughout the piece. The other instruments you added do add some variation, but they don't sound natural, especially in their releases. Fade out the volume as you get close to the end of the notes, and it'll sound more human. I'm not liking the trumpet sound too much, for it sounds thin. There's more I can add, but I just wanted to start with what really caught my attention upon the first listen. Keep us posted on your updates! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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