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i really love the original song...plz dont have screwed it up....

some nice sounds, but the levels are off. the lead isnt loud enough. also, please, use dotted half notes on the leads instead of bouncing the note around. it's just sloppy. strings in the back are too quiet. not enough harmony going on.

the strings just play dotted half notes thru the whole thing. there's really not enough going on harmonically. it's also short and doesnt go anywhere.

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As detailed as some of the synth work was in the original, this remake

(not a whole lot of creativity taken with it) just sounds tired by

compairison.

The drumkit is unarticulate and dull sounding. It just sounds flat. Try some

distortion on a highpass layered in, maybe some compression to tighten

up the sound, and more dynamic variation, esepcially on those snares.

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Posted

Some pretty fun synth work going on throughout- nice work there. A tad on the short side, and it is a bit repetitive, but everything that is here sounds pretty well done and nicely constructed.

I'm borderline on this one, but at the end of the day nothing strikes me as horribly wrong, and it's an enjoyable listen, so

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Posted

I thought this was quite good. However, the arpeggiator synth work in particular could have been more interesting. The drums didn't evolve as I thought they would, and they sounded quite weak. Just needs a little more work. Resubmit please.

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