Sunset Soaring - generic techno. Feedback, anyone?

[superjoe30]

What do you think?

http://www.superjoesoftware.com/music/share/song/Sunset%20Soaring

[Chickenwarlord]

The pads sound super swallowed in the beginning, I would suggest having a little something in the foreground. When the leads come in, it's a little heavy on the high end.

After the synth organ solo, things plod a little bit. Try to have something to catch interest before things kick back into gear.

The panpipish chord synth bleeds over a little more than I personally think is good.

Otherwise, you have some good separation going. I'd put a little more attention to detail into the drums from a creative standpoint, but what you have is definitely serviceable.

Good luck on your future stuff.

[superjoe30]

Thanks for the tips, I appreciate it.

[Gimgak]

This is pretty cool. I like the synthy style you use. And even though the song is the same chord progression throughout, you change the texture and lead enough for it to stay pretty interesting. And your transitions are really smooth. Percussion is good except that first bass drum that comes in sounds too high and sounds like it's in front of the other instruments.