empiezesarezar Posted January 29, 2009 Posted January 29, 2009 just something I started messing with, it is still rough but I am going to make lots of changes, here it is, LOL beed trying to upload this for like 3 hours) link: http://ocrwip.fireslash.net/?fid=43 hope it works ok just uploaded a tentative final, hope you like Quote
empiezesarezar Posted February 2, 2009 Author Posted February 2, 2009 just finished and uploaded a final version, hopefully someone will listen, I am going to sleep now Quote
Strife89 Posted February 2, 2009 Posted February 2, 2009 Sounds pretty good to me. I like the melody. Quote
Rozovian Posted February 13, 2009 Posted February 13, 2009 No source link, no source comment. I suspect it's a little too close to source, but can't tell without listening to source. Quite simple sounding, especially the drums. Brass needs to be more powerful, some nice synth brass might work better. The mallet-like synth is cool, the bass is ok. At 1:15 you have a bell lead too loud, and a backing instrument that just turns into noise and background carpeting. Needs some mixing, and I'd replace that backing thing to something else. 1:30 fills sound like they're written ok, but the samples are terrible. Intro, and the 2:00 interlude, and ending are all too simple sounding. Piano needs more processing: reverb and some EQ to make it stand out more. The stuff after 2:00 is jsut a repeat of the stuff before. Not interesting. Needs something new, something different enough. I recommend a change to the chord progression, bassline, as well as a new lead on top of what you've got. There's some crits for you to work on. Good luck with this. Quote
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