djpretzel Posted December 24, 2003 Share Posted December 24, 2003 (Sorry, my last e-mail didnt have the link) Hey, I made another remix, so just sendin it in. No real problems to alert of this time, spellings good haha. Heres the low down on he song. Name: Metroid Prime - Twilight on Tallon - OC Remix Artist: DJ Riott Year: 2003 Genre: Trance The link can be found at Thanks once again, Hope i at least get a courtesy e-mail on my last remix and this one. (just messin, i know your busy) David (DJ Riott) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrayLightning Posted December 26, 2003 Share Posted December 26, 2003 I can't say this is very enjoyable as a whole. There's a lot of clipping that brings down this mix. The lead instrument and other synths are very harsh. At least, some eq work definitely needs to be done on that. The sounds are piercing. Also I think the volume levels are way too much. When you have sounds this piercing, along with the loudness, it makes for a less than pleasant listening experience. I like the mix in some respects, but better instrumentation and more work on mixing and mastering would help this to be a better product. Good luck in the future. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vig Posted December 30, 2003 Share Posted December 30, 2003 1. clipping. 2. Akward as a whole, this lacks flow. it stays on a phrase for too long and leaves too many melodies out in the sun with no harmony. 3. only 2:20. this isnt the radio, lets get some substance, please. 4. poor ending. 5. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The wingless Posted December 30, 2003 Share Posted December 30, 2003 Oh Vigilante... your criticisms are like an old man slipping into a warm bath... so gentle. So soothing. Buuuuuuut, he's spot on. Not even a full five seconds in and I get a clipper ship. Not the best way to introduce yourself. Plus this piece gets crazy repetative without any variation or buildup. Dynamics are gone. It's just technically void and sonically, well, it's pretty flat. Engage us. Throw something at us. Right now, it's just a foundation. No Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protricity Posted January 4, 2004 Share Posted January 4, 2004 Lots of clipping straight off the bat. This song loses its feel with lack of reverb. Other than that, very repetitive and completely lacking in arrangement. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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