Evfan42 Posted May 22, 2009 Posted May 22, 2009 this song is something I have been working with, I think it sounds pretty good, just, I feel theres something missing and I just cant put my finger on it, I know the ending isnt that great, but I have really worked on finishing it yet, but any comments you guys have are greatly appreciated http://www.fileupyours.com/view/246596/original.mp3 Quote
Evfan42 Posted May 26, 2009 Author Posted May 26, 2009 anyone got anything? greatly appreciated Quote
JasonP27 Posted June 6, 2009 Posted June 6, 2009 sounds good... maybe too much bass (starting around 0:47 but then again I don't have a great sound system to compare you mentioned something is missing... I'd love to here a great piano part thrown into this and maybe change up the chord pattern about 2/3 of the way into it and then back before ending the song Quote
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