dbrown1986 Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 I've done a rather good job on this one, but... I need to know what I'm missing. The song is alive, has good progression and identifiable source as well as a unique canvas, but it just feels like there could be a little bit more. Any suggestions on this one? EDIT: Link Updated. Did a little volume mastering & removed the bass spikes. ADDED: YouTube Video (Do not depend on YT for the best quality, just an example vid) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJ-enova Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 Link doesn't work anymore... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbrown1986 Posted December 6, 2009 Author Share Posted December 6, 2009 Works fine for me try it again. UPDATE: The links have been updated, please listen and post your thoughts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbrown1986 Posted December 7, 2009 Author Share Posted December 7, 2009 Worked on a new version with some more arrangement and flavour. Master 5 (Reworked): http://soundcloud.com/dbrown1986/wip-mirrors-edge-still-alive-remix-reworked-master-5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJ-enova Posted December 7, 2009 Share Posted December 7, 2009 Sounds VERY good to me so far It sounds a bit too 'light' though I think. You may have wanted that but you should add a bass line behind to give it more depth. There was a version of 'Alcorus - Shine' (The Instrumental Theme) that started with a perfect one, but I haven't been able to find it again. Should consider it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbrown1986 Posted December 8, 2009 Author Share Posted December 8, 2009 The bass is there, but it's not as defined as the main melody. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjMystix Posted December 15, 2009 Share Posted December 15, 2009 One of my favorite tracks from this gen. I think it is good but needs some more work to get rid of that midi-sh feeling. Also, I think at some point, you should bring the bass to front to put more power in the lead notes. I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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