Starlight Zone

[JohnnyAppleseed]

Hey not sure how to get my mp3 up here? Help?

[TGH]

http://tindeck.com

Make a free account here, post your mp3, post a link in the thread, BOOM you're golden.

[JohnnyAppleseed]

thank you.

[Emunator]

Try to keep all posts about this WIP to one thread in the future instead of making multiple ones. Thanks

I'll give you some more feedback once you expand this and polish it, but you really need to pan your bass center. It's really hard to listen to this song and give you substantial critiques when the bass is so distracting

[JohnnyAppleseed]

Hmmm what do you suggest? I'm not good with finalizing things very much. Help?

[TGH]

Wait wut?? Where's the link?

[JohnnyAppleseed]

[TGH]

Thank you much.

Yeah, like Emunator posted, pan that bass to the center.

I like the filtered synths that come in, but I really don't get the pauses between the main part and (what I guess you can call) the bridge. It's like the song stops to change parts.

It's also way too conservative for OCR (I used that word correctly, right Emu? ) And also too short. I'm not sure exactly what you were going for, since it basically just sounds like a copy of the original. It's a good start for something that branches out a little more.

[JohnnyAppleseed]

That is mainly just what it is. Just a nicer cleaner sounding copy. Not a remix. Just a remake. And yes I did that on purpose with the pauses. It is not done so those will not be fixed until it is finished.